What do I like about Ashlee? She's real, or could be. She fits in well in the Death Note universe. I'm very satisfied that you kept your writing realistic, for example, not magically knowing Japanese, knowing every exact super detail of Death Note, the fact that Ashlee is afraid of Light, she DIDN'T want to get involved, and she keeps her fangirl in check... just... damn, it's refreshingly realistic and I am enjoying this so much.

P.s. I get very emotional about fanfics sometimes, and when L asked if she smelt blood, I totally flipped my shit and was cracking up.

:0 Oh hell no! Did she... Start... Infront of L? Oh hell no! That sucks! Update soon please!

While I was reading about her pain a thought went through my mind. 'Bet she's getting her monthly visit.' Then I get to the end of the chappie and my thought was, 'Uh oh... now that's awkward...'

Anyway hurry and update again. I must know what happens next.

*if that was me*
GOD PLEASE LET ME DIE kill me now please, no just throw me out the window. NO i will just go into the fridge and bang my head over and over with the door just don't let that be what I think it is.
BBBBUUUUTTTT it is not me so I am happy. So she can't die, thats a cool trick. Keep updating when i went on today it hands down MADE my day this is fricken hilarious ESPECIALY since this has happened to me before. Keep up the good work!
From,
Your EXTRA super stalker
P.S. For someone who is so smart L is kinda stupid to not realize what is wrong with HER when he smells blood.

Oh poor girl! That would be so so so awkward. In front of L too! I would want to die if that happened to me, I would just let Light kill me now):

oh jeez I know the feeling of said pain.

Well...that was unexpected!

I'd DIE if that had happened to me.

Can't wait to read more!

WARNING!
I have fallen for your story! You will now have to deal with my constant chatter and fandom!
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED! Dun dun duuun!

I love the name ashlee, it's really cute.
So far I love how this story is going.

Pretty intersting about the ink tasting thing, kind of new xD

First chap is pretty interesting so far, sad that her dad is such an asshole

Dammit Light! Y U WIN?!
Aw, I wished Naomi didn't die though xD It would have been so kick ass if she and Ashlee like joined forces or something.
Sadly, that ain't going to happen.
I am so excited to see where you are taking this.
Love Ashlee, she's so thoughtful XD

Nooooo, I can't believe that Naomi dieedd! Not cool ;_;
Though, I am slightly confused as to how Light got her I.D. Did it fall out of her pocket?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chappie and will happily be awaiting for ya next one :p

THIS STORY IS THE MOST AWSOME EVER AND DESERVES MORE VIEWS! I love how she has a kind heart and I wounder what would happen if she really turned pycic ( don't know how to spell that)