Beautifully written. I hope you write more for this story (and just write more period)!

Fav Line "I am independent. I am good. I am brilliant yet, one command from him and I crumble" Great Story, please continue!

Good story . I'm really liking it .

Cannot wait for tomorrow night! SCANDAL THURSDAY! Will Fitz's brush with death cause he and Olivia to rethink their relationship? Life is short. Too short to spend it away from the person you adore. I really hope that Olivia does not get all super righteous again and push Fitz away for his own good. All that pushing away just results in them both being very miserable. Also Olivia was clearly using Edison to get over Fitz. She kind of lead Edison on by pretending that she was "all in" when in actuality her heart was VERY much with Fitz. As soon as Olivia heard that Fitz might be awake she took off to be with him. "Get out of my way!" When is Mellie finally going to have that baby? Great story so far. You nailed Olivia's emotions. Longing for an update, soon!

Your such a good writer please continue

Amen. So poignant and sad! Good thing it's only fiction! Good first try.

Please continue... I love this. ;)