|Reviews for Struggling|
| SomethingFierce 1/27/13 . chapter 2
Wow. I'd always wondered about this part of Maxxie's past... U kno? If he'd struggled, or just realized... Or maybe denied himself the possibility.
So, thank you for helping us visualize it :)
I began to read it with the hope of it not being too cliche, and so far it's been good. I was afraid the Cody part might turn out to be too ehhh, but I think where you're heading is ... Realistic, and awesome:D
Grammar-wise, there's a few repetitions here, some awkward sentences there... But, for right now, I'm attributing to this being a diary. (People just don't re-check and edit those in real life, now do they? I kno I don't. (: )
Keep up the fantastic work, and keep writing! :D
| Guest 1/6/13 . chapter 1
I'm already in love, please keep it coming! c: x
| Guest 12/10/12 . chapter 1
It's really good, hope to see more!