|Reviews for Lolita|
| Bite The Dust 12/9/12 . chapter 1
Oh man that was great! So cute! You described their outfits and stuff really well, I've never been quite able to paint pictures in people's heads like you can. I like to think I'm pretty good at dialogue, but it might just be that I used to be the worst at it and have improved... I've never been very good at practicing stuff so it's really hard to get better.
I need to start working on those fics now...