|Reviews for Til Kingdom Come|
| Knuckiducki 5/23/13 . chapter 17
Sorry too lazy to log in! Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter.
Beth is actually ok, I think shes got enough heart to keep her hands to herself now. And Eva.. I can totally understand why shes running away (maybe the wrong word here, but its true).
And it just hurts to read the dialog between Ariadne and Alison. If old Arthur could hear how she compares herself to Beth... well, we all know! And I loved what Alison said about shoving food down Ariadnes throat. I begin to like her.
And the flash back...so sweet, although I have a ahrd time picturing a drunk Arthur ;-)
Eames ... I dont know what to think of him. I mean, its great that he looked for this Ms. Cross (exited to read about her) but he could be dangerous to Ariadnes willpower. And that sentence about not spending your life with the love of your life .. I hope thats not some kind of prediction ..Stop! I dont wanna hear anything about that, you ruined my happy end hopes already in the last story with your review reviews... But thats something I hate and love aout your stories. I feel like Im standing on my tiptoes the entire time and wont be able to stand properly until I know the end! I hope it wont take so long!
And Im actually scared to find out about the dar stuff in the next chapter! I dont know if I ever wrote this in a review, but update soooooooon!
p.s. why did I get the feeling that I should hunt the Internet for a nice summerdress while reading this chapter?
| Lazarus76 5/22/13 . chapter 17
| In.Blue.85 5/21/13 . chapter 17
Alison is also part of the club... good! I'm starting to like her.
Oh, I'm glad that my last review made sense, that day I was tired and sleepy and English is not my first language (so I'm always afraid of making a grammar mistake) .. But I meant every word. :-)
Ari and Eames had a moment... I can't blame her. He has always been there for her, he's a good friend, he loves her and, well, he's a handsome man.
The next chapter makes me nervous, but I can not wait!
| PrettyPrettyPlease 5/21/13 . chapter 17
Ugh...still killing me! I just want to slap Arthur. God...anyways, I had to lock myself into the back office at work so I could read this in peace. Loved it :)
| Lauraa-x 5/21/13 . chapter 17
Aaw poor Ari :( That memory of her and Arthur was sooo cute! Drunk Arthur is so adorable :') I really hope Helena Cross can help Arthur, Ari needs something good to help her get through this. Ooo if Arthur doesn't recover, would Ari consider being with Eames? Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next! xx
| LeslieSophia 5/19/13 . chapter 16
You are an amazing writer! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. As usual, I cannot wait to read more! I'm liking Micah more and more and I love how you write from each character's perspective. Keep up the great work!
| rcool98 5/18/13 . chapter 16
Don't let some criticism bring you down you're an amazingly talented writer and if they don't see it it's their loss! I loved this chapter and I'm loving what you're doing with Arthur's character. I hope we see some more Arthur/Micah moments because those are the best after of course the ones with Ariadne and Arthur :) I can't wait to read more I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| gina1276 5/18/13 . chapter 16
Your stories and writing are amazing. Criticisms will only lead to better work of you take it constructively. Don't let it get your down!
Anyway, keep the updates going. I want to see Ariadne confront Arthur or at least see more of their interaction! Also want the chapters to be longer. :) Jk good luck!
| Lauraa-x 5/18/13 . chapter 16
Thanks for the update! Bethany is a lovely girl, but something still bugs me about her :/ I wonder whether she will listen to her brothers advice. Even though I think Micah is in over his head now with the info and responsibility he's taken on, he could be the key in helping Arthur kick start his recovery. Can't wait to read Ari's POV in the next chapter.
Your writing is fantastic and you can see by the reviews you get on here. Every chapter I read, I just want to hug you because of the amazing-ness you create, what you make us feel when we read it and the dedication/time you spend. I think criticism can push you to become an even better writer ;) Keep up the great work! xx
| Eeyore08 5/17/13 . chapter 16
Poor Micah, I hope he hasn't bitten off more than he can chew. I don't like Bethany but that is because of what she represents to Arthur and Ariadne, she's perfectly fine as a character (very real and well-written). She just makes things a bit awkward. I hope this doesn't say something bad about me, but despite your dire warnings about the next chapter...I can't wait for it.
| In.Blue.85 5/17/13 . chapter 16
Yay! I'm so glad you updated!
Yes, poor Bethany but after everything Ari and Arthur have been through... I think we all feel Ari's pain, so the “hate” was like an automatic reaction, he he.
And Arthur... he scares me. I just hope this "madness" doesn't hurt Ari (physically).
I can't wait to read Ariadne's POV, my poor girl.
Now, I think you are a really good writer. Just look all the response! You are able to provoke an emotional response in your reader and you're so young, just keep going :)
| Theonlyredhead 5/17/13 . chapter 16
Ok. I think Bethany is a great character an I like your writing, but just don't like her. But don't take that the wrong way please I really like your writing. And Bethany is great. I just don't like her. I think it's just because she is getting in the way of Arthur and Ariadne. But great job!
| gina1276 5/13/13 . chapter 15
You just totally threw in a wrench! NOOOOOO! Really hoping Bethany will go away soon. :( haha Can't wait to read what happens next.
| Knuckiducki 5/10/13 . chapter 15
Just perfect. Seems like I wasnt the only one sensing trouble. I think you wrote once that you dont write things like that without a reason. And I might stand alone here, but I dont hate her... I mean, seriously: if one of us met a handsome guy, who seems also nice, ... ok forget that. You dont just jump friends of your older brother! Micah has to whistle her back! I think he will side with Ariadne on this matter. Oh, my heart broke while reading that, I could not be half as strong as her in such a situation. I love strong female character in literature! I cant wait to read more! But Im also a little afraid of where this is headed!
And Ive never seen a chapter get so many reviews in such a short time! Congratulations!
| PrettyPrettyPlease 5/9/13 . chapter 15
Dear lord...as soon as Bethany walked in I was like shit, poor Ariadne, this will not end well. You're killing me here! Buuuuuut on the other hand, I love the flow and intimacy of your writing. (I'm jelly.) I feel like I'm actually feeling what Ariadne is feeling. I know how it is with trying to fit writing in and stuff...but an update as soon as you can would be amazing. :)