I wonder which way you are going with this. Great job!

i really think that its too many people in their business...im not saying she should forgive him instantly..but i think the only way they can come out in a good space is if they work it out by themselves...too many people involved in your relationship is a recipe for disaster...also Kate needs to understand Ana is new to this and stop yelling at her and be there for her no matter what she decides...

As usual, I want to smack the snot out of Christian but, right now, I want to smack the snot out of Ana, too. If CG hadn't lost his erection, he most definitely would have had sex with the disturbed Leila and, most likely, enjoyed the hell out of it since he would have been in COMPLETE control of her and the act its self - his most sought after desire. Hell, he even went in search of condoms, so his having sex with L was intentional, not an uncontrolled, unplanned urge. Erectile disfunction was his only deterrent to f***ing Leila.

Kate and Ethan are correct in that if Ana caves and forgives CG, he will do it again and again until Ana is emotionally and, possibly, physically destroyed. Thank the Gods that Kate came in when she did or CG would have had A right where he wants her - naked, confined, and there when HE wants her - to hell what she wants and/or needs. I hope that Ana gets some alone time and is able to think clearly with her head and not her heart and without interference from her friends and/or C and his "friends". I'm thinking Flynn is pro-Christian. She needs her own counselor.

I'm not even sure CG loves A. I'm thinking her appeal is she's the one that's proving to be a challenge and MIGHT end the relationship before he does thus, taking away his control and we all know CG does NOT like to lose and controlling A is his greatest challenge.

I feel bad for CG & Ana. I think they are both getting bullied by the Kavaungh's.

Well this was like you took my Christmas present back :(
Ana needs to think for herself andnot let Kate or Christian tell her what to do or feel . Ethan said he didn't want her why is he even there and she doesn't want Jose . This girl some alone time away from everyone . Christisn excuse is feeble so if he hadn't lost it as he says he would have made love to Lelia . Or would his heart break think of Ana then stop . Not following his mind set here . I don't get him thinking that made it better or okay . Update soon .

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lova ya babe and ur story!

I loathe your version of Kate
Ana needs to tell her to f k off and mind her own business in fact Christian should throw them all out including Ana!
Why would she let them treat Christian like this if she loves him, I don't get it can't stand that cow

Sweet! Love it

forgod sake people who are reviewing if u you are reading my message than let me ask u a question, are you guys real doormats and pushovers in real life too?
i cannot fucking imagine going back to a guy who even thought of cheating on me,,,what ecer fifty says you mush understand that the douche is sugar coating it,,the fact remains!
he has enough sense to freaking dare to think about having SEX with leila, looking for a condom,,if his erection wouldnt have deflated he WOULD HAVE HAD FULL ON SEX WITH LEILA, now he is using it to his advantage that he knows he is in trouble,,,he had enough brain to cheat on her,,he was cheating on her thats it!
cheating fics are not lovey dovey shit fics,,this is where you encounter a dark side of a relationship,,if you want a romance fic read something else,,if she just forgives him than what?
tada story finish!
i really like your writing style,,but please just right now at this point dont make Ana think about her feelings for fifty but about what he did to her!
Their is a twilight fanfiction i would like to recommend you all! heres the link
s/7573547/1/Of-Pleasure-and-Pain

Aaaahhh I just want to yell at Kate and tell her to f**k off I know she is trying to be a mate but come on we all want them back together . She has to try and forgive him , I can't take the suspense any longer. Bloody love this story and can't wait for the next chapter :-)

Nice chapter I hope you can update soon!

Good chapter

Please, please write another chapter already. Its so exciting :)

Thank you for the update...LOVE IT ! Merry Christmas to you!

He wants to marry her but has sex with his ex...he is more than fifty shades...how does he justify that as being ok?