Omg this was an amazing story! Please tell me it doesn't end from there.

That's it, tug on my heart strings and then say "Oh no, it stops here SUFFER!" How very Moffat of you. I loved this and would love for you to consider continuing it.

Oh my, I was just about to burst out into tears when I read the last lines and suddenly I was back to grinning. I absolutely loved how you set up Greg being incurably ill and there is nothing Mycroft can do about it. Also, in my opinion they are very well kept in character, both of them, with Greg trying to be strong and Mycroft trying to take care of him without making a fuss and still working.

In short, I loved it and I thank you very much for sharing :)

Dear God! Every time Mycroft went into another room, my heart surged because I thought that Greg would "kick the bucket"...But yay! I love it! I like how you ended it with hope and just a tad bit of desperation from the reader (actually, A LOT of desperation from the reader!). So, lovely work! Thanks for posting!

-MW

A miracle or is it too late? I guess we all have to decide that for ourselves. Thanks for writing. Happy holidays.

Lovely characterizations! Would love to read more...

I need more!

It's bittersweet and suspenseful.

Keep writing!

Wow, such a moving story. I love it! Would love for you to continue this, I really want to know what happens next xD

Oh wow so emotional - I really feel for them both - and that curveball... Would love to see more of this!