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| Reviews for Immortal Shadow |
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  KY KY 6/18/13 . chapter 20 Although you havent typed up a new chapter in a while I have recently started to read this and frankly this KICKASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS so please write moreeeee!111 |
 My-Inner-Writer-Comes-Out 6/18/13 . chapter 22YAY holidays! Can't wait! Not just for more updates but because it means sleep in and then all day reading writing fan fiction! Ahhhhhh that is the life! (as sad as this may sound, I spend most of my holidays on Fan Fiction :D) |
| ERB000 6/17/13 . chapter 22 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE |
| Guest 6/17/13 . chapter 22 What did they talk about? I NEED TO KNOW! |
| Addy96 6/5/13 . chapter 2 Love it please update soon! |
| athenawisdom17 6/3/13 . chapter 21 This chapter is wonderful. Plz try updating faster. |
| daring2dream 5/29/13 . chapter 21 Okay, obviously we get bits of info of who everyone was in the past...but in all honesty, I'm just truly confused. Not necessarily with your writing but at the amount of information that was shoved in that chapter and how it almost jumped around sporadically. Interested to see how you develop all of that - truly, my brain hurts now haha. Intriguing twist with the death though (is it literally just her hand or is her body buried underground & still attached?) and the introduction of Aoife. My only note is keep working on developing the characters more. :) |
| solangedrake 5/28/13 . chapter 21 I'm loving thd story so far, but i found lupas part a bit confussing. I love zeke and carmen, so cute! Please keep writting! |
| AlexandraSterling41 5/24/13 . chapter 21 Shit just got real, please update |
| Alex Grimm 5/24/13 . chapter 21 Okay well I realized I didn't review yet so, haha! I am reviewing! It was awesome but I think you should write some more zeke/Carmen fluff... . I like fluff... Please update soon! |
| HaterJo 5/23/13 . chapter 21 :-) :-) . :-) :-) |
| Guest 5/23/13 . chapter 21 1.-What's going on with Rix? 2.-What did Carmen and Zeke talk about? 3.-I'm so confused! x) |
| Magena Storm 5/23/13 . chapter 21 Actually it had some interesting things happening :P Update when you can please! |
| My-Inner-Writer-Comes-Out 5/23/13 . chapter 21 Hehe! Oh and by the way, I looked at my maths test results the other day and my teacher had done all over the page and my friend was like: *Friend puts hand up* Teacher: Yes... Friend: Why are there little doggies all over our pages? Teacher: What the hell?! |
| Clarinetgoddess62 5/23/13 . chapter 21 Nice chapter, a little confusing. I'd still like to know what happened wit Lupa |
