And another good Xel/Ame story ^.^
I liked the dark atmosphere, it suits.
You could quite write more of them ^_^

greetings
Leya

Brilliant.

um...
err...
dah...
oh-kay. Oddness. First Ame/Xel I've read thus far... er, "interesting," I surpose...
Ahem.
Diana-sama

I've gotta say, this is a very good, very twisted, very awesome story.

YAY! MORE X/A GOODINES! n.n

Yay! You finally wrote somthing! Cool fic. Very twisted. I'm not really a X/A fan cause all the other fics are sappy and stuff but this was really in character and more realistic.

Twisted
I liked it

^^ Ah, I liked it!
I'm happy!
*is a wierd X/A fan* >.>;

I hadn't read an X/A before, and I thought the non-fluffiness was a refreshing change from the sugary stories I usually read/write. This is very well done!

Yes! Yes! Wonderful, bravo! I'm one of the ones who thinks it's out of character for a Mazoku to suddenly just love somebody when it's been shown that positive emotions hurt them. This is excellent - he can be with her because her love is pain, not 'cause he got all sappy. Whoo!