lol, I love the last part of this;)

Drossel /Vogel: interesting character. I wonder if we'll see him again. Perhaps he is a bad guy in waiting? Curious. I like the idea of a foreign spy... it's a new dimension. Anyway, I digress. Time- flies is a great story. Love your dialogue. Thanks for the fun ride.

LOL, funny ending to a great story!

Hah! a Yo-yo makes an effective weapon. Loved it!

What a scary ride for Artie under that wagon!

I have a feeling that were not too far from and end, but who knows?

Boy, Loveless sure is stubborn! LOL

'Captain Sluggish' LOL

Cool story, post more soon please!

Ah, the deliciously evil Dr. Loveless. You must have such fun wriiting him!

Your writing is so descriptive that it seems that Artie is in the room right now. Which is not a bad thing at all! :)

I love Loveless's dialogue. Spot on! I can visualize Michael Dunn's brillant blue eyes ( he did have beautiful eyes), and all his facial expressions. But time flies so I'll peak at the next chapter. (It would be kinda fun if Artie had a love child...)

Well, you had me fooled with the marble as well, and I'm the one working on a chemistry minor! You have Loveless's ego down perfectly, gloating and all. This is a really fun story!

Fun! I love Mike Murphy singing with the harpsicord. Makes me smile. But how he'll get them both out- now that they no longer need to rescue anyone- ahh! another chapter will help solve the mystery.

Oh that awkward moment when the person you came to rescue has already escaped!