|Reviews for 25TH HUNGER GAMES|
| TEAM BUTTERCUP894 12/29/12 . chapter 12
Awesome chapter! Update sooooon!
| katsparkle13 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Hmm..this is awkward. Doesn't Quell mean to "stop something"? I always thought that's where the name came from...
| Mattii16 12/28/12 . chapter 12
So Alicia must have known Barian beforehand. But, she doesn't know, just how deadly Barian can be.
| K.A. HEAYSMAN 12/28/12 . chapter 12
I just wanted to say thankyou to all the wonderful reviews!
I know my work isn't that long or descriptive enough at the moment, but I want to get the reapings completed before going into much detail.
I need more arena ideas! I've had 3 brilliant ones so far, but I'd like more choice.
Also, thankyou to Patchwork Doll for letting me know that I couldn't post an author's note as an individual chapter.
Once the reapings are out of the way, I hope to include some authors notes, where I can include shout-outs, answers to any questions your not sure of etc. Thankyou so much for staying with me, and enjoy!
| snoozinghamster 12/28/12 . chapter 12
Very good like the bit with barian
| Future Fantasy Writer 12/28/12 . chapter 12
Wow...you update fast.
Did I already say that? Probably. But it's true. And your writing is pretty good, too! You must really care about this. And that's a good thing. I don't know if you want to be an author someday, but I must say, it would make a fabulous career for you.
My one suggestion would be to name the chapters. If you need help on that, let me know and I'll tell you how. But besides that, you're doing great! Keep writing!
| Mattii16 12/27/12 . chapter 11
Oooh! I was smiling all through this. You really got his character well and shown how arrogant he is, I LOVE IT! Keep it up bud
| Future Fantasy Writer 12/27/12 . chapter 10
Wow, you update fasssst!
| Patchwork Doll 12/26/12 . chapter 9
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| Mattii16 12/26/12 . chapter 10
This guy sounds mysterious. I am feeling drawn by this guy. I wonder what his secret is!
| pr1ncess1 12/23/12 . chapter 9
I have an arena idea for you, and it's really detailed:
Hogwarts style arena! With the huge castle with so many places to hide in, and Peeves as a mutt that patrols around and attacks you if he finds you inside the Hogwarts castle. And outside on the Hogwarts Grounds, you could have the lake with the giant squid mutt, and evil mermaid mutts. And of course the forbidden forest, filled with all kinds of mutts like giants and evil centaurs. Stuff like that.
Hope you like this idea!
| snoozinghamster 12/23/12 . chapter 8
Very good. Love how you portrayed her. One thing cal us her older sister not brother.
| TEAM BUTTERCUP894 12/20/12 . chapter 6
wow! great reapings so far! continue, and i will follow!
| snoozinghamster 12/20/12 . chapter 6
rely liked it, would like it even more if u didnt delete this asd im writing in. very ggod th0u
| Mattii16 12/19/12 . chapter 7
This was great just like always. Coda seems confident, but not too confident. He seems like one to watch out for in the arena.