|Reviews for The Crayak Chronicles|
| Kultmaverick 1/5/13 . chapter 3
This is an interesting story! Please continue!
| Ember Nickel 1/2/13 . chapter 3
Another great chapter; these characters are definitely being portrayed as very alien (in a good way!)
| Salad Shooter 1/1/13 . chapter 3
Still liking this. I just wish I could visualize it better. Have you done any illustrations?
| mistrali 12/16/12 . chapter 2
Interesting start. I liked the clear hierarchy in this world, and the mixture of fear, excitement and awe these Guardians bring. I also liked the way you focused on one character (presumably Crayak) and integrated the world through him rather than dumping all the worldbuilding on us in one go.
| Salad Shooter 12/15/12 . chapter 2
Oh, very interesting! Can't wait to find out more about the Eian and the Guardians.
| Ember Nickel 12/14/12 . chapter 2
Really interesting start! The nods to the fact that these are nonhuman units were clever, and the imagery of the Median and breaking even seemed very creative.
| Chiroptera Jones 12/14/12 . chapter 1
Oh, this is great. You seem to have Esplin down well.
| Bird of Poetry 12/12/12 . chapter 2
Wow, really interesting worldbuilding here. You've already conveyed a lot, but you've also raised some intriguing questions.
| mistrali 12/12/12 . chapter 1
This is absolutely fantastic. It's entirely plausible that Crayak would contact Esplin. The Yeerk's desperation for freedom - and his yearning for power - are very well conveyed. Crayak's refusal to grant them to him is either a sign of another, more twisted plan (in the vein of canonical AlwaysChaoticEvil!Crayak), or a more prudent, foresighted, strategic Crayak than we see in canon. Either way, his character is much more nuanced here than in canon, particularly the bit where he sees his own past in Esplin. I never bought Applegrant's explanation that he wanted to annihilate everything and be sole ruler of the cosmos.
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 1
oooo that was such an exciting and well written prologue, I really hope you continue this!
| janajee 12/12/12 . chapter 1
nicely done. i've always wanted to learn more about crayak so this give me a nice headcanon to consider. :)
| Bird of Poetry 12/11/12 . chapter 1
An intriguing beginning. It's kind of a dark mirror of the Ellimist telling Rachel his story.
| Salad Shooter 12/11/12 . chapter 1
I love stories about bad guys, and I love Animorph fanfiction that's actually well-written, and you are doing both! so rock on :) I eagerly await the next chapter.