This is an interesting twist on what people consider normal moulin Rouge fics. I feel pity toward the person narrating this piece. I especially liked the part were you mentioned the effect of Come What May on the prositutes and Bohemians.

-Orlha

*sniff* v. elegant, bittersweet and emotional. you'll never, ever cease to knock my socks off, nitaglitz.

nor

So sad, but probably how it would turn out. No girl can ever compete with an idealized ghost, especially the ghost of the love of his life.

Toulouse...

...

...Christian...

*falls over*

Okay, sorry about that. I just thought it was in Toulouse's POV and how he loved Satine..

Whoops...

Anywhoo, this beautiful, Nita, daaahling! Just amazing.

Keep writin'!

*Twixxa

Quite beautiful, and a very good idea at that.. I liked the part about "come what may" and how he doesn't sing anymore. Gorgeous stuff. .

Becca

Oh wow, that was practically haunting. It was really beautiful.

*sniffles* oh poor unknown heroine! simply beautiful, hannahbelle

Ahhh Nita! Was muy muy beautiful :)

Luff ya chicken!

Lita

Oooh, Hannah... twas sadly lovely. Beautifully written, but then again, who could expect anything less from you.

Christian will ALWAYS LOVE SATINE!

Anyway... loverly.

Good Lord, Nita, that's depressing. It's bittersweet though; he doesn't sing anymore? That's a duketravesty, Nita dahling.

Wha? Is Toulouse GAY? What? I was a bit confused. Um, I would flame you for making Toulouse gay, but sense I have no idea if he is or not, and that it was writted well...I won't!

That was beautiful! Very, very touching and well written. Deep, too. Amazing!

Oooh, this was schnazz. It was a really good idea Nita-bean. :)

*goes off giggling about Toulouse/Christian*

!Crys