I hope with all my heart u wouldn't kill Eve but u did i'm sooooooo heartbroken right i might cry really

Great story. You make the reader feel a deep emotional attachment to your OC Eve. I cried in the end. Sobs and all. You can also feel this vibe all the way through the story. "Her flickering ki." And you can sense how it's going to end, even without her ki disturbances and her worries before summoning the dragon, because you know the curse has been the only thing keeping her alive for so long. But you still want to believe it will end well. I hope the sequel ends well. Where is it anyways?

I think this was my longest review ever, and the story earned it. though I would have preferred more action and lemonade.

so far this story's been awesome! And that was a great lemon, really. I myself have read quite a lot of those(*blushes in front of everybody*), and I can say it was something

I loved your story!

I'm only very sad that is finished and that is finished like that..yes, Eve has lived many hundreds years but she shouldn't die, well..I mean, poor Piccolo! He has finally find someone to love but she's already gone...it's so sad! And also poor Dawn!

However I'm going to read the sequel :)...Dawn is really e beautiful character, she is so sweet...and even "daddy" Piccolo it is! Great job, really great job :)!

Oh my god. Im a little distracted UU. I didn't see that after Chapter 20 there are more chapters :S... Well, keep reading, sorry UU

OMG! This was a beautiful story! I cried so much at the ending! oh gosh! I'm still crying...It was beautiful how you portrayede Piccolo's personality!

Wow, great Fanfic. But the final is a little strange.. How can she survive Eve to that? Its weird. But I like all your chapters, and how you manage Piccolo character. nice :)

Yuo really did make me cry at the end. I never cry because of fics ...

I loved the fic so much and the wish for Piccolo was very funny! Dawn was cute

This is a really great story

that rocks! I love fics with piccolo .. your are really good :)

Aw, so sad, poor dawn pickles, please write the sequel soon! It's the best fanfic, such a sad ending.

I like this chapter, I like it a lot! And I think you can believe me when I say: so did Piccolo he he.

But you either need a better spellchecker or a beta reader, you have a lot of mistakes in here.

But it's still a really good chapter!

(tears streaming, gotta give me a second while I gather myself up from falling apart) That was such a good ending, so sad but so good! Gosh, I'm crying *sniff,sniff* That should be noted as the best fan fiction yet! Long live Anime Goddess! We will miss Eve and I am greatly anticipating the sequal! Ja Ne and congradulations! Usarea

*wipes the tears from her eyes* That was SO SAD! I hate sad endings! POOR PICKLES! POOR DAWN! WAH!

Wow! That ending was unexpected. PLEASE! Put me on the mailing list for the sequel! This story is so god.