I think you have a great idea here. But when your just repeating the TV episodes without adding your own drama or spin on things it gets tedious. I know the feeling of wanting to do a rewrite of the season with your own character, I have done it myself, but the way you've taken to the approach I may has well jump online or put on Rescue DVDs and watch them because there is nothing different between them and your story.

This isn't a flame. Just my opinion. I really think if you concentrated on Aubree, her life and what she brings to the team, then I think you'd have a great story. At the moment it is just bland and bleak.

Oh, and you've stated your character as Aubree in the story but Victoria in the summary.

I'm excited for all three of them. Can't wait to read

Again heaps good looking forward to more

Again heaps good, updating heaps during summer holidays is great for passing time

Heaps good I'm excited for more