|Reviews for What If?|
| xXxKaraBeckerCutterxXx 3/21/13 . chapter 2
I think you have a great idea here. But when your just repeating the TV episodes without adding your own drama or spin on things it gets tedious. I know the feeling of wanting to do a rewrite of the season with your own character, I have done it myself, but the way you've taken to the approach I may has well jump online or put on Rescue DVDs and watch them because there is nothing different between them and your story.
This isn't a flame. Just my opinion. I really think if you concentrated on Aubree, her life and what she brings to the team, then I think you'd have a great story. At the moment it is just bland and bleak.
Oh, and you've stated your character as Aubree in the story but Victoria in the summary.
| Xxletgoxx 2/22/13 . chapter 4
I'm excited for all three of them. Can't wait to read
| Guest 12/20/12 . chapter 3
Again heaps good looking forward to more
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 2
Again heaps good, updating heaps during summer holidays is great for passing time
| Xxletgoxx 12/11/12 . chapter 1
Heaps good I'm excited for more