So far, the tale is a good one. However, your spelling is relatively atrocious. You need a proofer. Otherwise, do continue. I am very interested in how this will turn out.

thats a disfunctional relationship if i ever saw one.

wow this was a little 2 gay for me...2 much crying and gay loverness...ew Im gonna try the next story

huh? is duo gay?? i dont understand...but i sure like ashley though.

what happens what happens? is heero dead?

I thought it was good you need to keep writing PLZ!

boring.

Please hurry with chapter5 I can hardly wait.

Is heero ok? plz update

WTF?! OMG u have to continue ASAP!

Hehe, aw, the way duo's acting I woulda punched him too... Actually, no, but Heero probably would've... Hm... Are you ever going to continue this? ^^;; It's been awhile since you upated XD
Hehe, by the title I thought Heero was rough in bed or something :X Lol... There goes my head.

KBG:HERO!
Heero: Oh **! *gets slapped*
KBG:*slaps Hero continously* How dare you!*slap* Don't ever!*slap* talk to Du-chan like dat got it! *tosses him to the ground*
Heero: *nodds*
KBG: :) Good! Update soon JA! Du-chan let fo get ice-cream! *walks away stepping on Heero's back*-*CRACK!* OOPS! UH! I DIDN'T DO IT!You saw nothin' *runs away with Duo*

geez..they are so ** up...
update soon!

Just too lazy to sign in right now. Been a long time since I've read any GW fics but now that I'm back to it this one's really sad but good. Write more!*knows that is hypocritical because he himself isn't doing much on his own work but has writer's block*^oo^ If you have writer's block too take your time just be sure to post more on it sometime in your lifetime!

Nice story I hope you update soon. I was wandering if you have a beta reader or something cause I do see mistakes in your story but thats okay everybody has them...i think :P update soon! (again)