Great story. Though my inconditional love for Toby and C.J., Sam is so cute there

I loved this! Perfect characterization! Toby, CJ, and Sam work so well together, and the way you wrote them made it come alive. Wonderful!

lol. This was wonderful! I especially enjoyed the part where they discover where the apples were coming from. :) Loved the Toby/Sam interaction.

Wow. That was excellent. They were all so perfectly in character, I could hear their voices saying those lines. The situation was priceless, and all five elements were so well introduced, it was difficult to remember it was a challenge. Well done!

hehe, very funny! i like it...you did a very good job in integrating all the elements of the challenge! :-)