|Reviews for Derailed|
| doesnt-go-away 1/21/07 . chapter 1
Great story. Though my inconditional love for Toby and C.J., Sam is so cute there
| Ecri 8/1/02 . chapter 1
I loved this! Perfect characterization! Toby, CJ, and Sam work so well together, and the way you wrote them made it come alive. Wonderful!
| fang 8/1/02 . chapter 1
lol. This was wonderful! I especially enjoyed the part where they discover where the apples were coming from. :) Loved the Toby/Sam interaction.
| Jade Moon to lazy to sign in 7/31/02 . chapter 1
Wow. That was excellent. They were all so perfectly in character, I could hear their voices saying those lines. The situation was priceless, and all five elements were so well introduced, it was difficult to remember it was a challenge. Well done!
| lady rosethorn 7/30/02 . chapter 1
hehe, very funny! i like it...you did a very good job in integrating all the elements of the challenge! :-)