Okay, I like this. The concept was good, the execution was sparkling. And it doesn't hurt that Xander was easily my favorite Scooby. Why go for the kill, when you can go for the pain. Beautiful piece of sophistry. And so Xander. Too bad this is a one off, cause I could definitely get into this.
Thanks. I wish I had the talent to give you suggestions in order to improve your abilities but you already tell a good story. And there are no glaring technical flaws. And it is incredibly interesting to me.

I liked the last line - the Powers that Be certainly didn't seem to work right, so I'm glad they'll not Be soon.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.

Excellent one shot, made me laugh and grin evilly.

this is so cool!

Loved this. Would also love a sequel of some kind.

Loved it :) great portrayal of Xander & no character bashing. absolutely loved it

Very nice!

I love xander, good job