|Reviews for The Stranger|
| HavenCraze 5/16/13 . chapter 9
Ooh... That was pretty hot! -giggles-
And the mystery continues... Just what was Urahara involved in?
| Agent Texas 5/16/13 . chapter 9
Hmm, interesting! As much as I'd like to think on this I'm too distracted pondering the new Bleach chapter! XD
So...very intriguing definitely, I'm interested to see where this goes, sounds like it could involve Kisuke more than I first thought.
I'm assuming that the "Ishida" is Ryuuken just because it'd make more sense, I'll just have to wait!
| Lochness Nessie 5/13/13 . chapter 9
Oh my lord! This was a perfect first sex scene! I love love loved it! I cannot wait for more! I only hope Ichi will now be addicted to Grimm and be a complete nympho so we can have more of your amazing love scenes! ;)
Also, I love that Grimm jumped into action and fight mode when the gun went off. And that he protected/got in front of Ichi :) cute.
Please update soon, but until then thanks for the great chapter! Will def re-read!
| 27kirune12 5/13/13 . chapter 9
You stopped Grimmjow from deflowering Ichigo because of a FRIGGIN' COYOTE ! ! ! DA FUQ ! ! !
. . . but that lemon later was sooo . . . YUM ! ! !
Daaaaaaaamn ! ! ! I'm so interested in finding out more about Grimmjow and others ! ! !
T.T what if Isshin wwas a part of that agency as well ? ? ?
I'm looking forward for Urahara's reaction at Grimmjow popping his nephew's cherry TwT will he be mad O.O DAMMNNN YOOOU, SUSPENSE ! ! !
Pweeease updateee ASSSAP, ONEGAIISHIMASUU ! ! !
| Ai-coco-chan 5/11/13 . chapter 9
Wow. Just wow. I read all 9 chapters in one day, and I have to say, this has got to be one of my favorite fics of yours so far! I'm usually not into amnesia fics, but yours is very tastefully done and super interesting:D and wow, is this turning into a secret organization/government agent story? (/*0*)/ oh my goodness, so exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter! P.s. I love it when Grimm gets all protective of Ichi! x so cute! Hehe;3
| Boogermeister 5/11/13 . chapter 9
Very interesting! Now to see the morning after!
| tokiluv nonu 5/11/13 . chapter 9
OH MY GOD! why are you sooooo secretive?! god ! i've waited for this chapter for soooooooooooooo long and now you area gain adding mystery to this story! i loved the new chapter . seriously, the way things turned into... the hot stuff by the end ... it was AMAZING! thanks a tonne fore the new chapter!
| Leukonoe 5/11/13 . chapter 9
And that one with shotgun was unexpected but something like this suit with Kisuke :)
And yeah hot lemon, I love it with so horny and eager Ichigo!
And some the mystery is building up, I'm more and more excited. The word "military" show up, and some secret service(?) I love convention like these
And and and I'm waiting for more of course!
| MMagnet 5/11/13 . chapter 9
Grimmjow has a great assertion of Ichigo's defence here, that was quite remarkable to see how much a simple gunshot escalates his drive to throw his life in front of Ichigo, literally, so I quite enjoyed that.
Both Kisuke and Jushiro are strategically observing Grimmjow based on their new found knowledge of their "dead visitors" from the other day; just what exactly do they know? And it seems as if Kisuke had some involvement if or at least involvement in another organisation with his "position"... Hmm, that sense of unknowingness is really stronger and you developed a basis for the characterisation before you jump into the heat of things and you're doing this so well, makes me more attached to the characters first.
Hmmm, there was great writing in this chapter a lot of emotion and "other things" ;);) that were written and flowed super effectively.
| Minerva Teller of tales 5/11/13 . chapter 1
Ah beautifully written love scenes. I very much could feel the tenderness and Ichigo's nervousness too.
Also, loved how Urahara used the gunshot to stir something in Grimm. Very crafty.
Loving it still. :)
| darkhuntressxir 5/10/13 . chapter 9
i thought something bad gonna happen when the gun sound...
| Misc. Ink 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Oh my...so many unexpected twists this chapter! I highly doubt anyone guessed the real reason behind the shotgun, though some may have gotten close; I mean, who would have guessed coyotes? Anyway, that was a great idea and I liked how you used it to bring out a bit more of Grimmjow's ingrained instincts and possible past, as well as (possibly) providing some foreshadowing. Grimm and Ichigo's anger was justified, no matter the reason (it's basic gun safety to let those around you know you are going to fire a weapon!).
I was also not expected Ichigo to take the initiative or for them to have sex so soon. I thoroughly enjoyed it, however, and you did a great job making it steamy, memorable, and emotional for both of them. I also liked how you drew it out and had Grimmjow be extra cautious for his younger partner. As wonderful as it was though, I feel like this happy mood fr them won't last long. The picture of Ulquiorra was another great twist, as I would have thought Grimmjow's photo would have come first. You gave a glimpse into what these men may have been involved in before their current line of work (whatever that is), as well as what Urahara himself may have been a part of. This leads to some great questions about Urahara's past and his previous connections, and a huge mystery of what "that" is. It's getting really good, and I can't wait for another chapter!
| Scatter Hyourinmaru 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Oh boy... this is getting more and more complicated by the second! :)
| Mayuzu 5/10/13 . chapter 9
It's so cute that Grimmjow instinctively shielded Ichigo when they were near the gun. And I guess Ichigo is a natural seducer *lol* Thank you for updating )
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Grimm finally getts some! :D and so many peeps r supposed ta be dead and ain't! D: wtf is happening? I smell government conspiracy! The best kind!