*chuckles* This is great! More please!

Well done! Have a cookie!

OK This was different. Not bad, I enjoyed reading it.

I just have to say, in response to rhe Ryouga being fairly stupid statement, that Ranma, Genma, Soun, Mousse, Shampoo, Ryouga, Kuno, Mikado, Asuza, that Tea ceremony guy, Tsuba, and virtually every Ranma character is stupid. Ryouga gets less interaction with people or shooling than the rest, so is, unsurprisingly, even denser and more naive than most of the cast. Thus, I see no reason to change his age.

very good,more would be you.

interesting start. has potential. keep going.

Pretty good ! I was *very* hesitant to start reading this story, basically because I cant see the appeal of placing the Ranma-universe in another country...? But this far I must admit I liked it !

The only thing that shocks me about this is the fact that you gave Genma the name Gabriel. I thought that name was supposed to be like 'Light Bringer' or something angelic... Oh well, I wonder what Happy's name is?

Waow! You better continue, and soon! Please?

Great start! I don't usually read AUs for Ranma because they are usually aren't that great, but this has promise! keep writing!

You have a way with titles...cracked me up

character notes were a bonus

Not really a review - I haven't read the story yet. I just wanted to comment on the TITLE. If you like the goofyness of marital arts in America, check out the internet comic KUNG FOOL, at .net

wierd, but I guess you were trying to go all-american here. Just one little nit-pick: from what I've seen Nabiki calls Soun "daddy" and Kasumi calls him "father". write more though