 Rose1948 2007-05-26 . chapter 1*chuckles* This is great! More please! |
 2003-11-28 . chapter 1 Well done! Have a cookie! |
 dogbertcarroll 2003-04-12 . chapter 1OK This was different. Not bad, I enjoyed reading it. |
 shikome kido mi 2002-08-02 . chapter 1 I just have to say, in response to rhe Ryouga being fairly stupid statement, that Ranma, Genma, Soun, Mousse, Shampoo, Ryouga, Kuno, Mikado, Asuza, that Tea ceremony guy, Tsuba, and virtually every Ranma character is stupid. Ryouga gets less interaction with people or shooling than the rest, so is, unsurprisingly, even denser and more naive than most of the cast. Thus, I see no reason to change his age. |
 sweet-dream 2002-08-02 . chapter 1 very good,more would be nice.thak you. |
 libhranan 2002-08-01 . chapter 1 interesting start. has potential. keep going. |
 Monkey-Knight 2002-07-31 . chapter 1 Pretty good ! I was *very* hesitant to start reading this story, basically because I can“t see the appeal of placing the Ranma-universe in another country...??? But this far I must admit I liked it ! |
 Dragon Eternal 2002-07-31 . chapter 1The only thing that shocks me about this is the fact that you gave Genma the name Gabriel. I thought that name was supposed to be like 'Light Bringer' or something angelic... Oh well, I wonder what Happy's name is? |
 Roses 2002-07-31 . chapter 1 Waow! You better continue, and soon! Please??? |
 Kalio Halos 2002-07-30 . chapter 1Great start! I don't usually read AUs for Ranma because they are usually aren't that great, but this has promise! keep writing! |
 soyamiso 2002-07-29 . chapter 1You have a way with titles...cracked me up
character notes were a bonus |
 Babs Yerunkle 2002-07-29 . chapter 1 Not really a review -- I haven't read the story yet. I just wanted to comment on the TITLE. If you like the goofyness of marital arts in America, check out the internet comic KUNG FOOL, at http://kungfool.transpect.net |
 Myst Dragon 2002-07-29 . chapter 1wierd, but I guess you were trying to go all-american here. Just one little nit-pick: from what I've seen Nabiki calls Soun "daddy" and Kasumi calls him "father". write more though |