Wow, this is some poetic writing. Beautifully done - thank you!

this is absoloutely gorgeous. I love the 2nd person perspective (its my favourite to write in and you don't often see it). I could physically FEEL deb's pain and it kinda cuts through you. my heart just hurts, but in the best way possible. so beautiful. just, ugh. perfect.

Wow this was so beautiful, it made me cry (: