According to the author of the series ROTG is based on, Jack is only thirteen when he falls through the ice. I think I like it better that way... besides, did you see any hint of scruff on Jack's face in the movie? That usually shows up aroud 16,17 ish.

Ok so thx now excuse me as I go and get ready to get sum things cleared off! :) and thank u and sorry too for making ya update this! :( also hope read more from an amazing author in the future! :)

Er this isn't meant to be a flame or anything but. . . well this chapter makes no sense when paired with the rest of the story. I just read the whole thing and it doesn't flow with the rest of it. Is it meant to be a stand alone one-shot cause I would do that instead. It would make a whole lot of more sense that way.

It's over? But what about the missing chapters? A lot of those were my favorite to read... ;-;

That baby is wiser than me. Cool. Its a really good story so far I love baby Jack! But the fact he is so wise is sort of weird.

It truely has been a fun adventure. I hope at some point you do find your muse again. it is alway most distressing when they go missing. Until then, I wish you luck with the adventure called live and hope things go well. Thanks for all the wonderful chapters!

(P.S. I'm the Dragowolf with an account here but it won't let me sign in since I've already done a review for this chapter. So I had to sign out to leave a review.)

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You know, it's not fun anymore if you force yourself to write or type anything. So, I perfectly understand your situation.

It was great fun reading this, man! Hey, as cliche as it sounds, your one-shots have made me laugh, smile, go "awwww", and almost made me cry. I'll go back and read these from time to time (not that I don't do that already).

The same to you; keep believing!

OMFG! Y! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! this is sad! when do ya have ta end the story it was good! well anyways awesome job! and hope ta read more from ya in future! Also i didnt quite get chapter 48 think u could please lend some timeand explain that chapter ta me, please. If yes PM me. Well fantastic job! and Definitely hope ta read more from ya! :D

D'awwwww... But I like dis story :'( I guess it's your dision tho, and I'll keep my eye out for your new collection if/when you start again. I love you! stay awesome :D

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Nice work and its been a lovely ride! hope to see you back soon!

These are all so good! The stories and the one-shots are all very well written, and the characters are just perfect. I love motherly Tooth, she's just so sweet. Keep writing.

Normal person at end of chapter- "Holy crap!"

Me at end of chapter- "*screams loudly in me completely silent family room* DUN DUN DUHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNN!

hey can we get more details? i am a little confused.

hey can you do what Hyde is going to do to them?