Interesting. I like your writing style.

Nicely done! I like this fic a lot. I don't have much time but i thought i'd stretch my limit to drop you a review. Great job, and I hope you update this one soon!

Pretty good! It just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapters. Good job!

LiYaNeTtE

You right like a professional! Really! If anything, you need to edit a bit, but it was really good. You have amazing patience to keep the story flowing, to not rush it. I look forward to the rest of the story! You really have your characters down, the sadistic "re-educator", who may well reflect one of YOUR teachers at school, Obi-Wan, who's kinda easy, MysAri, all of it. That poor little girl! They're so terrible! Please rescue her soon!

Hey! I am really enjoying your story and I hope that you will continue to write it. Both the plot and charachters are very well handled. You are doing a very good job and I encourage you to continue. Please let me know when you post more, because I can't wait to read more.

Cheers!

I liked the way you used Latin in your title-it was Latin, wasn't it? Your antagonist isdefinately smart, definately very brutal and mostly without feeling. It is most curious whether you intend any of the Padawans to succumb to their darker desires. Your story is very similar to Melida/Daan, only giving Obi-Wan the advantage of hindsight. I can't wait to read more!

Good story, I can't wait to find out what has happened to Obi and the other missing Jedi.