I thought it was great! I would like to hear what happens next.

Not bad...but I still feel like you're missing something. Then again...this hasn't been updated in forever. You should either start over or hand the job to someone else...if you're still here.

Also, these chapters are short, and not even a bit informative in my opinion. But that's just me. Anyways, I NEED AN OFFICIAL YYH UNIVERSITY! NOW!

Content, but dispirited,
-MOOboy714

yayayayyayyayayayay

i would like to go to this school.
Name: Jackie Goodman
Age:13
Sex:Female
Race:(human, youko, koorime, diety, unimaginably strong creature that can take over all three worlds and their inhabitants, other) human
Hair:black with blue tips
Eyes:blue

Hey, love your fic. I'm going to e-mail you my form, that is if your offer still stands. please update soon! and im a toltal Hieinsanian!

Heart attack! Immune system failing! BEp!
From laughing too hard!
Yay! Dat was fun! Write more or I will beat you repeatedly on the head with my burnt poptart of Doom!!

*sniff* And why ain't I in it?
Kurama: Aw...poor Kyoko-chan...
Me:*sniff* Please nee-chan? I wanna be in it!

*falls on the floor laughing*
HA!
FUN!
Oh...Kurama's three foot whip...*avoids getting injured by Aruma*
Aruma: Baka!
Me: Hiei's baka...
Akimi: *bashes Me on the head with Aruma's wet noodle of DOM!* Fwack you! My hiei! *glomps*

*laughs head off at her nee-chan's brilliance*
FUN!

Hee hee...Why I am the greatest Spirit Detective in the history of the universe...
LOL baby sister!
^^

FUN!
^^
HOI HOBBLE!
It's Teesha aka Kyoko. I want you to read these hilarious stories by Goten0040.
Put that in pen name and read 'em!
They're fun!!

By the way, COOL STORY SO FAR!!
*huggles Tulio*
Tulio: Get off.
Me: O, low blow...

UPDATE SOON!

OOh, I wanna be in this fic! Let's see...

Name: Kageno Yuri (I wrote her last name first, FYI)

Age: 15

Sex: Female

Race: Youko

Hair: Dark Purple/Black

Eyes: Rose

Power if Not Human: Water and Plants

Favorite YYH Bishojo: Keiko (She kicks MAJOR butt!)

Favorite YYH Bishonen: Kurama and Hiei (*Drool*)

Comments: Brought HUNDREDS of Kurama and Hiei posters, does not have a room mate, so they cover the ENTIRE ROOM (Except her bed).

Yay! You're back! I've been waiting for you to be back forever!

And I pity everyone who has to go on Hiei's obstical course. *Wince.* Nyaaaaawww... but we love him anyway! *Glomp.*

(tear) i already sent in my "registration form"... (cry)

its really funny... i like it... BUT...
Hiei is mine. not yours. MINE. Hiei and i discussed this. it took around... 2 hours? but yes, Hiei is mine, and he agrees with me. I know "discipline fist", so HIEI IS MINE. end of discussion.
(sugar high fading... need... sugar...)
(runs for Figg Newtons (damn those are good))

(tear, sob, wail, CRY!) i already sent in my form and didn't read that last chapter.... (cry alot) I WANNA GO TOO!!!!!! (that was so not me just now... im writing out of character... (slaps self)
ow.
anyway, its really funny, and i like it, except HIEI IS MINE. Hiei and i already discussed this, and he agrees with me. SO THERE. Hiei is mine, not yours, and i will one day let Hiei rule the world!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!
(sugar high fading... runs for cookies)

(tear, sob, wail, CRY!) i already sent in my form and didn't read that last chapter.... (cry alot) I WANNA GO TOO!!!!!! (that was so not me just now... im writing out of character... (slaps self)
ow.
anyway, its really funny, and i like it, except HIEI IS MINE. Hiei and i already discussed this, and he agrees with me. SO THERE. Hiei is mine, not yours, and i will one day let Hiei rule the world!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!
(sugar high fading... runs for cookies)