Knife-ears! Finally, someone used my taunt against anything with a pointed auricular structure!

You and a mistake? Seems absurd, though well my proofreading skills hover well below average. As always you manage to give your characters fire and flavor, letting out just the right amount of descriptions to aid cogent perception, and generally berating yourself for facile-to-illusory errors. You're turning your readers into encomiasts. But really, do you plan to riddle this archive with stories? You might neglect finishing 'em, because one day you may wake up and find your pen (or keyboard, whichever the medium) heavy and your heart far from the task.

Wow I didn't review this?
I must of been really sleepy when I read the first chapter. So sorry!
But wow this is amazing. It adds a whole darker touch to the poorer parts of Serdin, and you portray Lire and Ryan in a way that makes it all the more realistic and deadly. Continue writing, please!
The one thing I'd suggest is putting a warning for language. Unless you did that already and I just missed it.

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Will u update this?

This story's plot is interesting, I like it. However, I kind of miss your comedy style. It seems that this story will be very serious so there will hardly be any humor.. Of course I will like this story if you plan to continue, as I said, the plot makes me curious what will happen to Lire and Ryan.

P/S: I wonder if you can manage all of three stories at once when you still have school work to do? It's rather hard to update every week, right?