Oh wow...I just keep reading this again and again...it's so sad. :( I really like how you showed Haruka, Michiru and Setsuna's relationship, though. And the bit at the end with Setsuna and Hotaru was adorable. Please update soon!

Sad and beautiful story. =)
I'm a Pluto fan also, especially of Sera Myu Pluto (Hosaka Yuko). She use "Dark Dome Close" in the Death Vulcan musical.

Hm...nothing wrong with tweaking the storyline, in fact, I do it myself, a LOT. I have to admit that Naoko-sama killing off all of her characters peeved me off a bit at first, but I got over it and realized how sad and endearing it was and the impression that she was trying to make. I really did like the fact that the outers all ended up together in the end. I would have done something like that had I been you, or Naoko-sama. I'm not sure if Dark Doom Close Is Setsuna'a forbidden attack in the manga but I do know that Time Stop is the forbidden attack in the anime. Pluto uses it to get Haruka and Michiru into the Mugen Acadamy after their airplane ezplodes after being attacked, and then Pluto "dies" for using the attack. I do know that she uses Dark Doom Close in the manga, Pluto uses the attack to trap the re-awakened Sailor Saturn and the evil inside another dimension, but then saturn is reborn and the four outers leave to raise Hotaru. I also have the strangest feeling that Pluto uses the attack when the inners travel to the future about where the later part of the Sailor Moon R season would fit into the manga.
Sorry for rambling on Lady Grizabella-sama, just trying to be of service :p, Thnx, for the continued writing making me happy.

I loved that story, it was so sad!

Wow! That was good!

OMG DUDE I LOVE THIS STORY...I've read it many times before, and thought I'd reviewed it but I guess I didn't...it's SO SAD!!! But I love it. I'm also a BIG Pluto fan. I love love love this story. Very good...keep it up k?

This is one of the best fanfics i have ever read.
I am a Sailor Pluto fan too i even have her doll.

Naomi hunter AKA Sailor Zi

Hey neat story. I really enjoyed it.

Nice story so far! ^^ Hope to see more chapters for this soon.

This is beautiful... amazing...

...please write more. This is truely amazing.

That was excellent! Sad :( but still excellent. I'm also a Pluto fan. :D Your writing is great. You described everything so well...keep up the good work!