Reviews for The Danger of Dreams

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Nevyn 2003-11-14 ch 4,	abuseOkay, did he go to see the demon or Charles? You bad guy in here is very interesting. Mostly because it is still a mystery. This story is very exciting and I really enjoy reading it. I read it this morning but was so tired to leave a review for this chapter that I had to come back. So that's why I'm pointing out much. Mostly I point out first thought things and I can't remember all of what I was thinking when I read this. Sorry. Or maybe that is a good thing... I'm quit interested to know how the monk knew that they were dead and from heaven in a sense. And did Tsuzuki end up grabbing Muraki's suitcase? It was burgundy, after all. Anyway, I hope that you write the next part as soon as you can. It's a shame that it ended here.
Nevyn 2003-11-14 ch 3,	abuseover the rough stone stone of power, and then steps back to wait. –take out the second stone And its name is Kirby!” That is so kawaii! I can’t help it. That is just so adorable how he named it. I read in another story how Hisoka has a cactus but where did he get one? He has one in here as well. I was beginning to think in the last chapter that Charles has a split personality, but it seems even more likely in this chapter. I still think it’s funny how Watari greets them with the offer of toast every time someone comes to visit him. And marmalade doesn’t toast that good in my opinion. And Shuichi sings of it inn Gravitation. I don’t think he knows what it is. And that was completely off subject. Anyway, I really like it so far and I know that there is only one chapter after this one and it seems unlikely that the story will end there, so I hope that you finish this soon. smiles kindly
Nevyn 2003-11-14 ch 2,	abusebig eyes This is so good! I really love it. It's written so well! I can't get over how your story has no errors in it at all. It's amazing. And the dream! It seemed so real. The story just flowed into it. What happened when they got back? Nothing? So weird. I'm wondering why he is dreaming about the future. It's to warn him. It'd only figure that he'd be able to tell the future as well as do a few other mind things. Precognition is actually not that unusual. I'm still amazed. And I love the personality you made Watari and the fact that he is talking to a toaster. It's great. keep up the good work.
Nevyn 2003-11-14 ch 1,	abusegrin that's a great way to start a mmurder plot. usually stories start a murder plot after the fact. with the decriptions of the case. very nice. claps i like the narrative you used here. even describing the sounds her shoes made. or near sound. squuishy can be a sound in a way. it's to bad she took that hand but you know, he is deceptivly nice when you first meet him. until you get to know him... anyway, all in all, a very nicely down chapter.
Shaynie 2003-01-18 ch 4,	abuseI really like where you're going with this, it's very well written, the plot line is very intriguing and you've gotten Hisoka and Tsuzuki down really well :p And Watari as well of course, (yay Watari!) ahem anyways, Good luck with the rest of it, I can hardly wait for the...continuation :p
Literary Eagle 2002-12-29 ch 4,	abuseA captivating mystery! I like the humor too. Please keep up the great work!
sherbie 2002-12-20 ch 3,	abuseI also would like to mention I found that Charles guy infinitely amusing~ wondering if he would make a re-appearance anytime soon?
sherbie 2002-12-20 ch 4,	abuseRabu The chapters are long, descriptive, and has substance. Story also seems to be in character, yay! ^_^ And the plot is engaging, can't wait to find out more, although the story seems to skipping all over the place, like that whole shredding-soul thing seemingly coming to an abrupt halt, and something else picks up. I know this shinto shrine thing probably ties into that, but for some reason, it seems, err, disconnecting. ^^;; Okay, I have no idea what I'm talking about, just keep writing the way you're writing, it's terrific, really. Although Hisoka seems really aloof and cold during this, but is he trying to be strong for Tsuzuki by not being overly emotional, or what? I also felt that Muraki might have bothered Tsuzuki for a teeny bit longer~, but that's just me. ...I think I talked too much ~_~;;
yamatoforever 2002-12-19 ch 4,	abuseOoh, who or what kind creature exactly will attack Tsuzuki in the next chapter? Would Hisoka finally talk to Watari about what was trouble him? Please post the next chapter quickly!
yamatoforever 2002-12-16 ch 3,	abuseI wonder what is the meaning of Hisoka's dream? Are they really a premonition? And why did Hisoka stay unharm while the other were killed? Not that I'm complaining through. Oh well, I'm just gonna read chapter forth right now. I'll review later.
Morien Alexander 2002-12-08 ch 4,	abuseo_O Muraki is one straaaange little man. Uwa! The idea of 003 snuggling up to Watari IS cute. ^_^ And Tsuzuki making puppy eyes for the peanuts... heart He's so adorable.
ctt 2002-12-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's interesting and well written. Good characterization. A lot of ends though, I hope you update soon so we'll know how it all comes together.
kei4 2002-10-11 ch 3,	abuseaww..come on u'v gotta update this pleaseeeee
Aeris 2002-10-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseVery interesting! I hope there will be new characters hehe.. Please continue!!
XPKoganei4XP 2002-09-20 ch 3,	abuseWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI #_# I luved the part where Hisoka came in contact with the "demon." That was AWESOME! SUGOI DA!!!!! Sugoi dayo!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY HAYAKU HAYAKU! Write more! ja na! V XP

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