Such a great story! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

So glad to see an update! Loved Martin's "accident". Can't imagine how that happened!

Awww, loved that Finch and Terra scene! Update XD

Robis, huh? Sweet.

Martin is gonna try something isn't he? Oooo, rubbing my hands with glee. He is gonna get his butt kicked either way.

wow, harold's got a kid! When are u gonna update? I need more! :)

This is great! I can't wait to see how Terra reacts! Please keep writing!

Now this is a surprising turn of events! I wonder where they'll go from here.

I really like this story! You're doing a great job! Please keep writing!

lol, liked the fight scene and the bit at the end. Keep writing ;)

This is really good, .Terra and Reese fighting, Reese on the losing end of a fight, "She started it." Too funny. Good characterizations of John and Finch and I like Terra.

Please please please keep writing. So far this is amazing!

Don't Let Go... Hold On Terra; SuitMan is coming to your rescue.

Can't wait for more!

Are you a teenager? Cause if you are, that explains a lot and then I guess you were writing as expected for your age and so the story was okay. But if you're not... Tara is acting like a kid, not a tough young woman/girl. I read every chapter so far, but I'm not sure I really like it and I also noticed that someone said twice you had 'stolen' parts of Burn Notice that I haven't seen, so I can't know, but it makes me wonder, if you took more from any shows or books. Anyway keep up working on it and I'm sure you'll get better as time goes by:) And you obviously have a few people that already like it and that's always a nice thing; maybe one day you can add me to your 'fans':)