Wow, holy crap, this is really sweet and adorable. I never honestly thought of anything like this; props to you, mah good fellow Rave-writer.

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i like this because it explors what would have happened if haru lost and elie had een forced to go to the 'real world'. im suprised no one had tapped this idea, its perfect fanfic material. while i dont like giggly i love lucia Elie, i get that shes like this cause shes imortal

It's not as bad as you think it is. there are stories that focus on physical descriptions, dialogue, characters, story, etc. this one just happens to put the focus on emotions, and I as the reader really understood the tenderness that was meant to be taken from these scenes rather than the motivation of the characters or the circumstances that put them there. To be honest I wouldn't mind seeing more from you in this category in the future.