This is great so far. I am also working on a Crash Bandicoot Oragin Story of a similar title. Please give it a look some time.

Great fanfic. Now, I'm not a fan of the second Crash game since I never played it or seen a video of it. But who cares, I'm reading. This was a great fanfic and you should do more fanfics. This will go down in my history books. Keep up the specialized work in your career

That is cool. I think that's why Brio betrayed Cortex in Crash Bandicoot 2. But it's depressing for the good guys and Brio that this is happening to Jan. Well, this is cool, make the last chapter count as the best.

That chapter is cool. I really liked the curing part. But this was me on the crash'e near death part, it is over. The bandicoot dies. But Jan saved the day. Keep up the special good work

Well, this is increasing more interest for me. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the N. Brio and N. Cortex boss fight.

This is cool. See, I told you will be a legend. Right now in my mind, who will crash like? Tawna or Jan? I'll have to find out later. Keep it up, buddy. Wait, is Papu Papu going to be in the next chapter? Well, bring more funny stuff and guess what, i'll get popcorn. Bye

Every thing's good. Only it's your way of the beginning. Oh, by the way, i'm still in progress my first fanfic (super wars). Coincidence. Anyhow, keep the progess up buddy and you will be a legend to some of us. No pressure, okay.