Wow. Just wow. It makes sense, while still rhyming.

P.S. I can't believe people didn't notice while you were writing this. XD

Cute poem. It was among my favorites.

Maaan so powerful... "Thumb up"

hey I'm Hanori Wonderful.
I'm From Indonesia

I Think This Is a great poem, This is a beautiful poem

and I like this fanfiction.
:)

I live in indonesia. but I know English Language :)

It may be short, but it is powerful. Good job!