Why I didn't see this sooner? I'm so happy you wrote this and it was so much fun to read, I liked the way you describe the characters and the pacing was just right.

I guess my only pet pieve was that Dexter seemed to cold to me(?), at least at the begining, you got me fooled there for a moment!

Over all great one shot! I really enjoyed it, I hope you write more in the future!

Good job although the part where Dexter sais the whole thing about the heroin and stuff sort of reminded me of Twilight, not that I watched it but I saw a thing on YouTube about the top 7 or 10 worst scenes of twilight but other than that it was very enjoyable and I love how you described Dexters character

As evidenced by my own writing, this is not my favorite pairing. Your characterization - especially of Dexter - and motivation, however, were excellent throughout and made this quite an enjoyable read.

dammm talk about