|Reviews for One With The Elements|
| ThatOneChickWhoWritesFanfic 1/16/13 . chapter 8
,0.0, why do I have a bad feeling about this cousin of hers? I can see some drama going down in the next few chapters :) great chapter! Can't wait for more!
| amberjarve1998 1/1/13 . chapter 7
Awwwww! This is so sweet! The ending at least! I love this story! Keep writing!
| sparrowismyhummingbird 1/1/13 . chapter 7
Aww this was so sweet! I'm intrigued about Osuma..he seems less fierce that I imagined, then again you haven't had the chance to portray him fully yet so I'll look forward to when you do.
Quick question: how come Yuki didn't transform when he wrapped his arms around Takara's waist?
Update soon! :D Can't wait for more!
| amberjarve1998 12/30/12 . chapter 6
Finnaly they know each others secrets! Hahaha! And it's true that little kids give the best answers, even though they may seem odd. Poll answer: Kaede she is so awesome! I lover her character!
I'm looking forward to the next update!
| sparrowismyhummingbird 12/30/12 . chapter 6
Hee! You portrayed Akane well! :) Can't wait to read more and see how all the characters progress now they know each others secrets! And of course how you'll progress with Akane too haha :P thanks for plug my dear! :D awesome chapter. Update soooooon!
Poll answer: Kaede. I like the cute little friendship she's got with Kyo. She's like his little sister which is strange because he's never had to care about anyone before. She could change that.
| XxMijikaixX 12/30/12 . chapter 6
I think you know my answer. Kaede is pretty awesome for a four year old.
The irony of Takara's words 'what's the worst that could happen?". I love irony; it's what makes the literature world go 'round.
Good chapter, and nice touch with Haru getting lost. Its just like him.
And I've never been good at Maths.
| sparrowismyhummingbird 12/30/12 . chapter 5
Brilliant. As always.
Interested to see if Hatori will consult anyone about what he's witnessed. Or will it just cause him to slip into a distant, thoughtful mood? The mood could then cause someone to ask him what's wrong.
I don't know. You can go that deeply into it if you like. Up to you of course!
Update soon, Zodiac! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| ThatOneChickWhoWritesFanfic 12/29/12 . chapter 5
I went to my inbox and found a sparkling gem in the form of a notice that you had updated. Thanks for the enjoyment!
| amberjarve1998 12/29/12 . chapter 5
I love how you portrayed Akito in here! You showed who he really was!
| XxMijikaixX 12/29/12 . chapter 5
Wow you made Akito seem really mean and mental, which I s'pose he is, but man, he is evil in this chapter. Well done, and keep it up.
| XxMijikaixX 12/29/12 . chapter 4
Ooh foreshadowing, that's exciting. I like how you set this up. Can't wait for the next chapter. Again, me and Kaede just seem to think the same.
| amberjarve1998 12/27/12 . chapter 4
I love how Kaede acts around her older sisters. Its so funny with Ami talking to Takara about hugging Haru. Are you going to have the twins find out about the curse in the next chapter? And are the Sohmas going to find out about the Tochigis curse?
| ThatOneChickWhoWritesFanfic 12/27/12 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed the chapter, regardless of length. Great work as usual!
| sparrowismyhummingbird 12/27/12 . chapter 4
Hehe the scene between Hatori and Gure was amusing ;) made me chuckle :D haha cant wait for the update! Your writing gets better every chapter! Oh! Update soon cos I'm travelling to my nan's where I'll be bombarded with family so I'll need your story to get me through! Hehe don't forget your laptop when you go to Norfolk, eh? Lol
| sparrowismyhummingbird 12/27/12 . chapter 3
Aww this was a sweet chapter! :) Haha at the beginning I was half expecting Akane to turn up! Lol you can actually include her, you don't have to add in the sibling to Akito bit but she can be the girlfriend/partner of Hatori still and it can be another OC if you like. :) hehe I don't mind loaning her ;)
Update soon, Zodiac! :D