Why oh why hadn't I read this earlier? O=It's awesome! It's so brilliant *bows down with much respect* You are awesome!! >_< The fic was just so Hiro, it was perfect! And the way Shuichi acts and what he does and says, it was so like him, too. My chest constricted and it was very emotional, so many of my thoughts were mirrored there! I hope you write more one-shots like this, that was very, very good!

That was wonderfully angsty, incredibly sad.The kiss really did kind of seal a spell there. Well, broke one. Thoughtfully written! Thank you very much for the opportunity to read such wonderful work!
Shuichi was so needy and sad. AndIlikehow he wasn't manipulative,consciously, then realized at the end that it hurt Hiro. It easily could have been part of the show.
wowzers.

This fic is a great example of how I see Hiro: overly thoughtful, caring, and hiding his own melancholy. Nice job.

thankies for all the nice reviews.

i'll have to redo this on my MSWord again, since i only had wordpad when i first wrote it. that's why the formatting is off. also my shift key broke today, so i can't shift. i WANT to write a hiroxshuichi, but i just CAN'T bring myself to separate yuki and shuichi. they worked to hard to make it work. i WAS thinking about adding some chapters onto this and going deeper into it.

as far as formatting goes, the paragraphs WERE indented originally, but when i submitted it to fanfiction.net they all dissapeared. sorry about that.

That was a decent fic. There need to be more Shuichi and Hiro almost-love and love fics. I think I'm beginning to like Hiro. I haven't seen a single episode of the series cuz I can't get ahold of them, but I know most of the storyline and I'm really attached to it. You would do well writing another Hiro-Shuichi fic. I'm sure it would turn out well. Maybe you could make it a real romance fic.

Just a few little problems I had, and they're just grammatical ones. When a new person speaks, you should start on a new line. That's just to let the reader read easier. If you don't indent your paragraphs (which is fine), you should have at least one line seperation between them (like my review here). Make a new paragraph when you start a new idea. With all of this in mind (and applied), your story will look more appealing on first glance to the reader, and they will follow along with your train of thought easier.

Story-wise, I liked it. Just watch the grammar of your stories, and they will be even better.

A Good Gravitation Theme: "You Look So Fine" by Garbage. A very inspirational...love...song.

I think I'm attracted to Hiroshi,
DJ Ultima

Angst is so good.
But it always kills me and i start wanting to cry. >_

angsty as hell. loved it.

*sighs* touching story.
Can't wait to see more of your writing! :)

*sniffles*

So sad and beautiful *wipes nose* I'm a sucker for well written sap which this sooo is *nods*

Great job as usual

*glomps* have I ever mentioned how much I love you? Hiro is absolutely one of the coolest in the show and yet theres almost NOTHING about him out here!

It must be so hard to love someone like that.. Shu doesn't know how very much Hiro sacrifices for him... or maybe he does, considering how Yuki treats him. Unrequited love....u.u its so sad...

Great!! story! hehe...as usual your fics rise above the rest... n.n keep writing!! and WRITE MORE ON NaR!!! Or SFH will beat you! *demands* ja~!

Aww, sad... ;_; but good though! ^_^