Great writing. Really enjoying this. You seem to be able to see beyond things to get to the mindset of the damane. Very well done.

Your writing is wonderful; You cope beautifully with the challange of realistically presenting the POV of a damane - someone who has come to love slavery, making her sympathetic and all the while showing how wrong it is. I look forward to the next update and promise I'll try to to give a more detailed review then.

What a wonderful start to what promices to be an excelent series. You really seem to get the Seanchan mindset and way of looking at the world. I wonder how long Dali's pledge not to channell will hold? Not to mention it must be a bit unsettling for an Accepted or Aes Sedai to have to teach a student who is probably better at using the power as a weapon that they are and who could decide to try and kill you if you annoy her too much.

I look forward to reading the next instalment

This story is amazing! I haven't read much WoT fanfiction that I actually like but this is exceptional. I can't wait to see where Dani goes next! Keep writing, please! 3