the story is so cute

Can I just say that I absolutely adore the way you write? Because I do. It's like you make everything seem so realistic. You don't exagerate- you don't go in to detail about /how/ they feel, you say /why/. I just...I can't get over how flawless you are as a writer. Honestly, it blows my mind.

Darn it, you make Brick so freaking adorable when he's angry I can't stand it. This was so simple and cute, yet it still makes my feels go out of control.

GAH. IT'S SO CUTE.

Really good

awwwwww brick blushes...i love how believable this is, totally what they would've done at this small age! its so cute! PEACE :P

Loving this all over again :)

AW! THAT IS SO CUTE!

Oh Will you continoue ? )

Daw how cute!

You really ARE alive! Everyone thought you were gone forever! :D I'm glad you're back, though. This was written in '09 , huh ? Splendid work. The way you captured their ages just perfectly was magnificent. Fantastic job. I really hope you'll decide to stick around some more! Merry Christmas to you! :)

xoxo -ml

That is definitely something Brick would do! I love how he blushes at the end...:D I look forward to reading more of your magnificent stories!

This is really cute. They're totally in character_

Cute and fluffy! I'm in love.. Hmm, I do wonder what Blossom had gotten for Brick..

I've read that before on your live journal and AAAWW can I just say how much I love the immense cuteness in this? Best holiday fic, yo! :D

hi i just gotta say i loved reading your fics i was reading a few early imagine my surprise when i see this staring back at me after seeing you haven't written in so long i actually gasped anyway loved the fic per always and glad to see your still writting them and i really hope your working on more than human i cannot wait for your next chapter as many other loyale readers but i still love your other fics but i hate how short they are when i know they could delve way much farther but i can,t complain afterall it,s like you write with magic seriously i force myself just to stay awake and i have been thinking of even writing one myself but we,ll see if that comes to pass anyway enough of my thoughts i hope you enjoy your christmas and your new year you earned it hope to see more of your soon or whenever you get the chance till next time.