Great story love it!

This story was great :)

Your concept for the story was good, changing the parts of the story that result in a tragedy. You spread yourself a little thin with your first story trying to follow two different couples. The story contained more dialogue than description, but you have to be careful with that because readers may lose interest if it is all description. I don't want you to feel like I am bashing your writing or your story, believe me when I say that I enjoyed it, especially the humor of it. As you keep writing you need to remember that even though you can picture everything, your reader may not. There needs to be more to the story and more behind people falling in love, if only it were that easy. Its a great start so keep writing. :) You'll get the hang of it. Took me years to write as I do now, and I still have a long way to go. You're a good writer, don't let anyone tell you otherwise!

This was absolutely wonderful! I loved it!
Can't wait for another story (with gwaine of course) ;D

Now it's my turn to squeeee! A personal mention at the end of your wonderful story. I feel honoured!

And you gave me a wedding. *sigh*. It was perfect. Dreamy... And funny. I love the image of Gwaine and Elyan dancing together. :-D

You do realise you have to right a sequel now don't you? I want to see the reaction to Percival's revenge spell. And I suspect Gwaine will assist in getting revenge for the revenge... You know what that means? Prank war!

This was a brilliant story and I'm sad to see it's end. You were awesome! Please write more fics like this!

Cookies for you! I would really like it if you continued this, not just an epilogue...

Great chapter please update soon i love this fic

Noooo!

Awwww I've really enjoyed this story. I'm sad it's coming to an end. I think you've done a really good job both with creating your new characters and with how you've written the ones we already know and love.

I love them all. Nice happily ever after epilogue now please! Or even better, a sequel. And a wedding. Hmmm I'm getting demanding how, sorry! Thank you for the story.

I don't think that you should shove your wants down your reader's faces because that usually forces your readers to lose their respect for you.

Constantly telling your readers to review or else future chapters will not come faster, is a sure way for you to lose more readers than you ever gained.

Great chapter! How about he puts an embaracing curse on her that only he can remove. Something like bright coloured hair, or not being able to touch or kiss Gwaine for a week!

Hope this helps! ;)

Love it!

Haha you did it, you made them wear dresses! Awesome! Loved that Percival and Rachael are engaged, are you going to let them get married in the story?

Great chapter love it, plus great image to put in my head before i go to bed, thanks