 Blonde-Existentialist 2009-12-14 . chapter 21Interesting ending. I must say it wasn't what I was expecting you to do with the way the last few chapters had been progressing, but I'm quite happy you didn't to a sunshine and flowers lovedovey romance ending. This fits much better with the overall tone and setting of the story you've had. The whole thing was rather believable and in character I thought, and I rather enjoyed it. |
 Seren McGowan 2009-11-23 . chapter 21That was awesome...one of teh best stpries I've ever read. I can't believe teh end has come so fast...
Congarts for the amazing story! |
 viatrix lone 2009-11-06 . chapter 21the best b/v masterpiece ever. enough said.
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 staryllia 2009-10-27 . chapter 21I love this!! |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 21*crowd gets up and applauds* Bravo! |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 19love it |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 17Wow, that was good. I was waiting for them to get together... |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 15"I hate that I cant hate you." Omg so kawaii |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 14man, if I was vegeta I would be like, "Get rid of the human." |
 RchHghr 2009-10-25 . chapter 13I was going through my favorite stories today and I saw that this was updated and I got so excited. I never recieved updates by email which I should have. There's so many chapters I have to catch up on. I love your story. This chapter was great. |
 Shiranui 2009-10-12 . chapter 15I'm sorry that I didn't start writing comments earlier but I mostly use my small freetime to READ this fabulous work of yours (and it's hard to stop actually). But now I absolutely need to tell you how fabulous this chapter was. Very beautiful! Especially the last sentence is pure glory.
Well, overall I'm very impressed. I have to admit that I grew tired of "mysterious 3 years get together" stories... And I'm glad I started to read yours anyway. It's one of the most authentic ones in my opinion. Vegeta isn't a fluffy creature (that's the reason I like him that much actually) and I think you characterize him and Bulma very great.
It's pure joy to read your story. So thank you very much for writing it ^^ . |
 Jerr 2009-10-10 . chapter 21 Huh, not quite what I was expecting. Usually authors throw a lemon out on the last chapter, I was thinking, what with all this leading around you've been doing, that it was going to end that way, but i'm glad that it didn't turn out out that way. I mean it still seems to have a open-endedness to it, like its begging for a sequel or something, yet it's so damn cute at the end and so damn satisfying.
Thanks very much for writing this fic and posting -- it was a a pleasure to read and different than most of the stuff I've read, which makes for a very nice change. |
 Jerr 2009-10-10 . chapter 17 Damn, I'm liking this chapter! I mean, hell, it was cute in a weird sort of way! I like the whole crud load of revelations that are popping up! And the developement of Vegeta and Bulma is really interesting as well. I think this has to be my favourite chapter thus far. |
 Jerr 2009-10-10 . chapter 7 Ah, finally we get something good. I'm sorry but Im not a fan of over-domineering men (hate them in fact) so I was really worried what turn this fic would take after that slap Vegeta gave Bulma (also not a fan of abusive men), but that conversation Bulma had with Chichi kinda of placated me. However this chapter just has me beaming. Im so happy Bulma is has decided to work around her fear and is now fighting fire with fire. |
 BlackLioness 2009-10-08 . chapter 21An interesting take on the development of Bulma's and Vegeta's relationship. This was a well written, highly enjoyable story. I also noticed you started writing this story a while ago and admire your dedication to it, thank you so much for finishing it. |