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| entilza 2005-04-25 ch 2, | abuseI have read both your Quest stories. Please update soon! |
| Mareo and Anime 2004-08-31 ch 2, | abuseMe: AW! Poor Vaporeon! Vaporeons are my second favorite Pokemon! Anime: (Worridly) What's your first? Me: Servipers, of course! (Glomphs Anime) Anime: (Slightly muffled) Choking... Not breathing... |
| liz 2004-07-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease write another chapter,please! |
| liz 2004-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusenish-mosh-nay-hay was right,you are a good author.nice chapter. |
| WildTotodile 2004-06-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI know that the Vaporeon's in better hands with Amana than with Drake. That is so mean of him to be whipping it. The poor thing. |
| Melchior the Mewthree 2003-12-17 ch 2, | abuseYou're evil? You're evil? Well, I'm more evil! I shall conquer the entire Earth and rule it with an iron fist! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sol: Oh, quit it, M. You're never gonna do that and you know it. How do you know? Sol: Erm.. I don't know. Maybe because I'm an espeon and I can see into the future? Really? Sol: Duh! Well, then, who's going o take over the world? Sol: Hamtaro, of course. O_O Anyway, this is a great story. I like the dragoli. Seems so cute. I like your stile, too. Melchior |
| Kura Prideful 2002-12-05 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! I love the way you balance your statements, it reminds me of A Tale of Two Cities ^_^ Very nice beginning. *goes off to read the next part* |
| Jessiekat 2002-08-17 ch 2, | abuseGasp! I love this one! Oh, fanfic, how I love you - let me count the ways ... For one, you've done up two stories stemming from one. The characters are also so believable - no one would expect Amana to go say goodbye to her parents like Trina did. Dragoli rule! I want one, man! n.- And, for some odd reason, I sort've like Drake. Maybe it's just the name. ^^; Don't kill me! Anyway ... I'd like to see more of this! Write more, or I'll be forced to sic the rabid, pixie stick-devouring squirrels on you. |
| Morbane 2002-08-11 ch 2, | abuseI don't know if I'm supposed to or not, but I find myself liking Amana a lot more than Trina. They've *both* got attitude problems. More specifically, it was a nice touch to have the whip burned. Visual. And yes, the star explanation was very sweet. |
| Holy-Psychic-Vulpix 2002-08-06 ch 2, | abuseHowdy Partner! Good start. |
| Sergeant Pepper 2002-08-05 ch 2, | abuseYEs you are slightly evil.....not as evil as say......ME...but almost there....nice story...I figured since you've been so consistant in reviewing my story,I fell as though I should review yours.....and I am plesently surprised at it....you are quite the little writer....and I have an offer.....if you want.......would you like to have a small bit part in my story...just a random character or something? It be my way of re-paying you for the kick you give me when i read your reviews....makes me wanna keep writing...if you ya do....just e-mail me...the adress is prolly in my profile....but enough rambling....good story...now...keep writing!!!! :-D |
| Treble Clef Julianne 2002-08-05 ch 2, | abuseGotta love them cliffhangers. ^_~ The scene with Amana explaining the stars to BurningSky was very sweetly done. ^_^ And I also hope everything is all right for that Vaporeon.... |
| Dark Wolf of Teros 2002-07-31 ch 1, | abuseOh... WOW!!!!! This is really good, you've even created two new pokemon for this Fic. ^_^ I like it so far, keep the Good work. ^_^ |
| Draco the Spirit Dragon 2002-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait to see Dragotheryl but then I'm a dragon nut! i like how you have developed Vampireon too! |
| Morbane 2002-07-31 ch 1, | abuseohhhh... I like Professor Hemlock. And what a neat name - BurningSky! Love it!!! I like Amana in the kitchen. It makes her believable as a character to twirl a glass of water around when she thinks. Cooooool. Watch out you don't overstate the char-angst. |