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entilza
2005-04-25
ch 2,
abuseI have read both your Quest stories. Please update soon!
Mareo and Anime
2004-08-31
ch 2,
abuseMe: AW! Poor Vaporeon! Vaporeons are my second favorite Pokemon!
Anime: (Worridly) What's your first?
Me: Servipers, of course! (Glomphs Anime)
Anime: (Slightly muffled) Choking... Not breathing...
liz
2004-07-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseplease write another chapter,please!
liz
2004-07-28
ch 1, anon.
abusenish-mosh-nay-hay was right,you are a good author.nice chapter.
WildTotodile
2004-06-18
ch 2, anon.
abuseI know that the Vaporeon's in better hands with Amana than with Drake. That is so mean of him to be whipping it. The poor thing.
Melchior the Mewthree
2003-12-17
ch 2,
abuseYou're evil? You're evil? Well, I'm more evil! I shall conquer the entire Earth and rule it with an iron fist! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Sol: Oh, quit it, M. You're never gonna do that and you know it.
How do you know?
Sol: Erm.. I don't know. Maybe because I'm an espeon and I can see into the future?
Really?
Sol: Duh!
Well, then, who's going o take over the world?
Sol: Hamtaro, of course.
O_O
Anyway, this is a great story. I like the dragoli. Seems so cute.
I like your stile, too.
Melchior
Kura Prideful
2002-12-05
ch 1,
abuseExcellent! I love the way you balance your statements, it reminds me of A Tale of Two Cities ^_^ Very nice beginning. *goes off to read the next part*
Jessiekat
2002-08-17
ch 2,
abuseGasp! I love this one! Oh, fanfic, how I love you - let me count the ways ...

For one, you've done up two stories stemming from one. The characters are also so believable - no one would expect Amana to go say goodbye to her parents like Trina did. Dragoli rule! I want one, man! n.-

And, for some odd reason, I sort've like Drake. Maybe it's just the name. ^^; Don't kill me! Anyway ... I'd like to see more of this! Write more, or I'll be forced to sic the rabid, pixie stick-devouring squirrels on you.
Morbane
2002-08-11
ch 2,
abuseI don't know if I'm supposed to or not, but I find myself liking Amana a lot more than Trina. They've *both* got attitude problems.

More specifically, it was a nice touch to have the whip burned. Visual. And yes, the star explanation was very sweet.
Holy-Psychic-Vulpix
2002-08-06
ch 2,
abuseHowdy Partner! Good start.
Sergeant Pepper
2002-08-05
ch 2,
abuseYEs you are slightly evil.....not as evil as say......ME...but almost there....nice story...I figured since you've been so consistant in reviewing my story,I fell as though I should review yours.....and I am plesently surprised at it....you are quite the little writer....and I have an offer.....if you want.......would you like to have a small bit part in my story...just a random character or something? It be my way of re-paying you for the kick you give me when i read your reviews....makes me wanna keep writing...if you ya do....just e-mail me...the adress is prolly in my profile....but enough rambling....good story...now...keep writing!!!! :-D
Treble Clef Julianne
2002-08-05
ch 2,
abuseGotta love them cliffhangers. ^_~

The scene with Amana explaining the stars to BurningSky was very sweetly done. ^_^ And I also hope everything is all right for that Vaporeon....
Dark Wolf of Teros
2002-07-31
ch 1,
abuseOh... WOW!!!!! This is really good, you've even created two new pokemon for this Fic. ^_^ I like it so far, keep the Good work. ^_^
Draco the Spirit Dragon
2002-07-31
ch 1,
abuseI can't wait to see Dragotheryl but then I'm a dragon nut! i like how you have developed Vampireon too!
Morbane
2002-07-31
ch 1,
abuseohhhh... I like Professor Hemlock. And what a neat name - BurningSky! Love it!!! I like Amana in the kitchen. It makes her believable as a character to twirl a glass of water around when she thinks. Cooooool. Watch out you don't overstate the char-angst.
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