Omg this is one of my favorie stories ever! I love the ending but I hate to see the end I wish there was more but its the end so I wanted to say this to all of the readers, even when a great story ends the story may remain forever in ones heart. And I want to say something to the author you have made the best stories I have ever read in my life I would stay up till 3 am reading this and may I say your really good at poetry, i hope this story will forever last in my heart, I hope to see more and more stories from you and I also hope you'll be on fanfic for as long as up you live!

the perfect ending! this story had me hooked the entire time! your characters are portrayed very well

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site, or anywhere else, even. I really liked how you didn't go with the typical 'King and Queen say that the prince/princess HAS to be in an arranged marriage.' I also really liked that the love potion didn't end up working, because too many times things like love potions come into play and then they have to be broken by some stupid thing that just doesn't make sense, but the way you did it just was so much better. Also having the twist of Trunks leaving for nearly seven years was really good, too. I don't think I can remember a single grammatical error at all, and this story was easy too read. Everything just made sense, and nothing was confusing. I think you got everyone's characteristics down to a T. I never would have guessed what the fiancee's name was! I wonder what it was that Koslin exactly smelled like... oh ew haha. I also liked the amount of involvement that Pan's family had. I liked how you had Goten show up every once in a while. This story is really great!

Heh, Trunks is so damn cute! And now I am craving pie... apple specifically.

I love this story!I must have read it, like.. 4 times:) My favorite T/P fic FTW! I love how you described everything..I could pretty much picture how everything looked it was that good:D

One of my most favourite fics on this site, read it at least 3 times! love it XD

i hate pan!i hate her ! what an idiot, what does she think she's doind pushing away love?and she's supposed to be the one who knows what love is. oh poor trunks...

Wow. Just...wow. I'm speechless. I promised myself I wouldn't review til the very end of the fic (though I was reaally tempted to at some of the earlier chapters)and now I don't even think I have words to express what a beautiful fic I think you've written. It was perfect. I loved it down to every last detail, from Pan's and Trunks' characters, to Bulma and Vegeta's...even Marron's. (I had a feeling it was her btw. When we finally find out her name I was like 'Yess I was so right') You make the reader feel as if they're there. You make us relate to Pan and Trunks and their whirlwind of emotions. And that, I think, is one of the biggest accomplishments you can have as a writer. I've read alot of T/P on the site, and not many have made me feel the way your story made me feel. I can honestly say it was one of the best ones I've read, probably one of the very best T/P's on this site. You've really got alot of talent. I was so emotional at the end of this fic, I was sad it had to end. I'll look forward to reading more stuff by you. Keep up the amazing work,

-Rose

Awesome story, I'm so glad I found this. I don't think it could've been more perfect. Seriously.

I wish i sent u a review sooner. I read this story last year in May and forgot to send one. So, now im going to. I just LOVED this story. I was attached to it until the very end. I hope u know, the reader i am, it took me probably 4 hours to read or longer. Hope u write more. You might of wrote others, but I just can't seem to find you yet. So This is 1 of the best stories i read so far to. I JUST LOVED IT! LOL!

I LOVE THIS FIC! ITS SO AWESOME!

-

IT WAS A PLEASURE READING; THANK YOU!

i gotta say, i avoided this story for a while b/c it was about spells and magic etc... but i am SO glad i decided to read it.. really great!

so i wonder how pan will react to trunks will she recognize good fanfict.

i remember this fanfict it was very good the first time i red it.i am rereading it again and this time i will add it too my few good fanfics that are complete

Hey, i have reviewed this b4 'n i'm pretty sure u don't really check the story for them nemore, but it just occurred to me (after re-reading it for the umpteenth time) that this story is so well written that i actually feel as if i could study it's different meanings in a literature class. There are so many referrences between different characters actions towards each other. This past year, i have had one of the best literature teachers i could ever imagine and he is the one who really helped me understand how to interpret stories in this way. I have also read a couple of your other stories, and all of them tend to have the same quality to them. You should keep up the good work with more stories and i really think you should look into doing it professionally (if u haven't already). It doesn't even have to be nething to do with anime. These stories could be any character you decide to make up, and the meaning is still perfect. This is why i love reading this story multiple times. Not many fanfics have this same quality. I'm going to send u this in a message also. Just to make sure you receive it.