A little short but a good action scene. Keep up the good work.

Damn cliffhangers...(there worse in fanfiction then they are in TV shows and old cartoons and anime.

I want to see what happens...

Keep up the good work.

I already know who the ? person is :) (Apparently someone is a dimension hopper)

Nice chapter.

WOW...this story is near identical to KKBatoretto's (Only with minor differences in it.) I hope you go a different route with this soon so it doesn't seem like you just copying someone elses story. :(

Continue soon.

Nice story. I think I read something similar in plot before called "Black Rock Shooter: Rise Of The Others" by KKBatoretto

Continue when you can. See Ya.

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