That's...wow. Just wow. In the amazing, in the spectacular sense, of course.
This must've taken a significant amount of time to finish...congratulations! *clap clap clap clap clap*
You're so good at writing out emotional scenes...teach me? LOL xD
Anyways, really good! I don't know what else to say...uh...woohoo!

A severely selective ending, but that happens all the time. Accolades for you finishing this up.

Fight scene's good. Keep it up!

Updates! Sorry for being so ambivalent, I didn't want to come across as a caitiff hiding behind sententious semantics. I really have no problem with the story. You're diligent and bear your self-ordered onus with responsibility. This story has more updates in a week than many other tales have in a month, and readers appreciate that. At least, you make it clear that you write for yourself, not for reviews nor wordy meed. Toodles!

Ur the best.. :D
Keep going Sir..

-aya 3

Is this the end? Please don't end here. It's too incomplete if you stop now. And anyway, do you just write these chapters impromptu, blanketed by the nigritude of imminent dawn?

I like your story so mush ! (y)
But.. can i request ? if the story already finished can you make a story about ZeroxDio (m-preg) ('w') ? please ? ('w')

oh gosh, I can't wait until the next chapter. I really thought that Luca and Lime died, but gosh... The only thing I can say is WOW.

Lass and rufus in a dress...
It's trully an epic scene to watch...
I was wondering what kind of dress lass wear,is it some kind of maid dress or summer dress like that?

I think the queen was defeated too fast even though she was like a last boss or something
*i personally think that she needed to be tortured more for what she had done. #cough*
Will you explain the queen's motive for hating demons and opening the portal? Or did she do those things because she's a sadistic queen?

I really love your stories especially the way you write them,i just get the feeling

Now i wonder what will the sadistic queen do...
Will the reincarnation of the other characters appear too?
This story makes me even more curious now,i can't even sleep wondering about the story

W...whoaa ! Is that mean gran in humanoid body ?! What is he doing ? Killing all the people ?! Arghh ! I still confused. I want to know a lot.

And.. Mari is death ?!

I freakin' love it! This story is too awesome

REEALLY Interesting Story... Keep Going.. :D
Good Luck with the next Chapter..

-aya 3

REEEALLY interest what will happened the next chapter...
I really love ur stories..

-aya 3