J'adore ta fiction, j'adore le couple Kazama Chizuru, et je VEUX suite ! :DDDD

Ahhh. Inspirations of crushes. Always lead to magical things. Good and a bad typeof good. Glad you still update! Be awaiting your next update.

Love. You are using the wrong sure/shore. You used shore, its sure haha. Shore is related to beach, sure is more of a consenting thing.

And Lemon. I am totally up for it, and I honestly think you'd get more views with M haha from reading experience. The M rated are some what popular. Update soon!

I'm a little confused...is she falling in love with him so fast because of the mark manipulating her...? I mean, it seems a little rushed for him to suddenly be head over heels for him, especially if she is still loyal to the shinsengumi...I would love to see a shinsengumixchizuru side pairing here, just so things don't feel like they're moving too fast. I like the idea, but I just want Chizuru to still be with/like the shinsengumi and vise versa. I guess I'm just used to it being that way...

I could turn this review into a terrible Dos Equis parody but I won't because this story is AMAZING! I hardly ever review on stories unless they are exceptionally great and I can't out predict the author (which I often do) but I can't this time and I LOVE it (it gets annoying knowing everything that happens) so please write a new chapter soon! You had a few miss spelled words but nothing to big. And your grammar, thank the lord you can write. This story has a great plot and is written well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next update xD

I love it !

OMG ! Je veux savoir la suite ! J'espère vrai qu'elle arrivera rapidement ;p
Aaaaaah j'adore Kazama et l'idée de le comparer à un ange vengeur et vraiment bonne !

J'

I like the story, but I feel that the third chapter is very different from the first two. A lot of the words are missing a letter or spelled incorrectly and many of the sentences are complete run-ons, making them hard to understand. Also, I think that Chizuru is a bit out of character. She's not the kind of person who would get a nosebleed or say "holy shit", in my opinion. However, I like the way it's going and look forward to future chapters. :)

Hell yeah, that was awesome!

I think your getting better with your writing :) I'm liking this story so far but I'm a bit confused about the cherry blossom. Was it made made out of her blood when she was bitten? Or does it look like a tattoo? Thank you for updating :)

Awesome! Please update soon XD

Salut ! Hé oui je suis française ! Mais je lis quand même ta fiction à travers un traducteur... Je vais me présenter !

Donc je le répète, je suis Française et fan d'Hakuouki :p Surtout de Kazama mais aussi des fictions K&C. J'étais vraiment contente de voir qu'il y avait une fiction de mon couple préféré ! Ah oui ! Je communique en français car mon niveau d'écrit en anglais est plutôt mauvaisl... Sorry xS. Si tu ne maîtrises pas non plus ma langue, fais comme moi et utilise Google Trad xD Enfin bref...

Pour en revenir à l'histoire, je trouve que c'est un bon début même si les chapitres sont un peu courts... Ça nous laisse légèrement sur notre faim (je ne sais pas si cette expression existe en anglais... Comment dire ? Cela ne nous satisfait pas entièrement ?). Mais cela n’entache en rien son commencement, bien au contraire !

Je trouve aussi que ton écriture en "compréhensible" (j'utilise des guillemets car parfois quand je lis des fics anglophone, c'est traduit d'une telle manière que je ne comprends absolument RIEN !)

Je suis aussi en vacances d'hiver donc j'espère que tu publieras aussi vite que tu le promets ;p

Huuuuum... Kazama qui vient voir lui-même Chizuru ? Qui est "tout excité" ? Quand j'ai lu ça (je crois que c'est Shiranui qui a dit ça) j'ai rigolé pendant au moins 10 minutes x)

Enfin bref... Je crois que j'ai assez parlé, j'attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience et j'espère de tout coeur que celui-ci sera plus long !

Bise Olivia :)

Wow I really love it! Plz update soon. I can't wait for kazama to turn on his charm:)

I think you're off to a good start :) I think there were some spell errors( small ones ) and it did seem like some lines were written more than once ( just said in a different way ), but I don't think you have to worry so much. I think you have a nice story idea and your writing isn't bad. Just write the best you can and I'm sure you'll be fine :) I hope you update again.