That was funny, but in a WEIRD kind of way...kinda gross and creepy, but light enough to be funny, YAY! Keep it up!

LOL! Is this going off the movie? I used to have the movie. i watched it all the time. I always felt bad for Thumbalina. And yay! You gave myles a part! Really funny stuff. Too bad ur never updating again. *sigh*

who is myles gonna play?

I myself see not much humor is this and you are mocking Tamora Pierces books. But then again, it is my own opinion so you can ignore it if you please.

You need to fix this story. It has your names as Lady Lily and Kel of Queenscove.
Shelly~

Start writing the next chapter NOW!

Hehehe!

LadyKnight

You forgot the Goddess too.

Hahahaha! Hehehe! Hoho! Guwaf!

Yay! CNNNN is on tonight! I'm Fungry!

Chances are you have no idea what I'm on about, but that don't matter.

~Googlepuss

giggles malicously.

Read Little red riding hood by us and Cinderella Queen of Fluff (i think).

what the hell? i did not understand any of that maybe you should make it make sence!

Hehehe! Poor Thayet! Poor Jon! I can't believe I never read the first chapter till now! My favorite part is where George- er, Georgelina- says, "What the... I am lost! Oh no!" Funny seeing George be ditzy!

hey ashlee whats up hey i hjave another idea. so when u reaf this call me but if it is in the morining you can forget about it juss call me in the afternoon or sumthing juss not in the morning. i am so bored and hyper of of soda it is really really really fun

cou'd you put kell, cleon or owen in it? or is it only sotl your dooing?

I can't wait for the movie! This is kinda like Cinderella Torall style. I love these. Write more!

this is good! Write More!