   Wonderful Nightmares 9/19/06 . chapter 1ohh I love it!-Risen Demon |
| Simply Myself 12/30/02 . chapter 1 Wow! Simply excellent. |
| Cathy B 1/11/02 . chapter 1 Kind of weird in the middle, but I liked the ending! |
| I.C. Fire 9/1/01 . chapter 1 wow.. that was powerful... yipes... Well written! |
| Luinthoron 7/5/01 . chapter 1 A really good one! Very deep. |
| Imp 2/12/01 . chapter 1 Cool. Very neat. No, really, that was exteremely inetersting. (Have you noticed that I have been going around reviewing practically all of your fics?) |
| Ash Night 12/16/00 . chapter 1 Oooo... This was brilliant! *claps hands* Nice... dark... depressing... my type of story... |
| DrEaMzPiXiE 11/16/00 . chapter 1 woah deep |
| Hallie 10/24/00 . chapter 1 oh dear... that was not a happy fic, was it? no no no... but it was extremely, extremely good... excuse me, i'm in an odd mood today.. then again i most often am... i'm at home with things that are odd.. la la... what was i saying.. oh yes. your fic. very good. gomen for the topic change there... dammit i'm doing it again. well gomen, and very very very very high appraisal to you. |
| Aurelia Violet 10/23/00 . chapter 1 Hey! This is the one I was laughing at, right? Haha just kidding! (Well, I was laughing...)Maybe I thought the part about those "damn muggles" was funny. Oh, and that part about "killing" the mirror. Anyways, I'll shut up now. Great poem! |
| netshark 10/13/00 . chapter 1 Hm. Not exactly flowing, and Voldie seems slightly OOC...perhaps you could incoporate a reason for why Lucius does what he does? It's okay, you can tell that it _is_ inspired...though more elaboration would be nice, and s instead of s. |
| Tigre 10/11/00 . chapter 1 Lucius. Definetly. |
| D.M.P 10/10/00 . chapter 1 Whoa... very depressing, very nice, PikaCheeka... _ I loved the free flow style there; it got me into the poem very well. And... dum dum DUM The mirror shattering thing again! _ Geez, are we intent on smashing mirrors? You now realize that both you and I incorporate mirror-smashing in our fics? Tee hee hee imagines Cho, Draco, and Lucius all having a mirror breaking contest Wonder if anyone else realizes this trend... Hey, wonder how much bad luck the HP characters have added up now... _ Anyhoo, great poem. _ You should try and write some more. |
| ain't nonnaya beezxwax 10/9/00 . chapter 1 Deep. I wish it was mine. Very, VERY deep... |
| Aurora the Enchantress 2 lazy to sign in 10/9/00 . chapter 1 That was so sad... I was listening to some depressing songs on my mp3 player while reading it and it was creepy... so depressing. Love the last lines. |
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