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| Xharg 2008-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseVery very good. It's a first story I've read here and it was great. |
| GeT.a.FiSh. 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseGood. Very good. Better than the book, in my opinion. Aside from the fact that it was from Ginny's point of view and the books were from Harry's, it was perfect. I suppose it was a bit better to have Ginny's point of view in this particular version. To me, it seems like a better closure, especially with the fact that Harry saved her life and just kind of ignored her again the next book. Your version's a bit better. |
| Parcel 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAWSOMENESS-ESS-ESS-ESS-ESS-ESS |
| MadnessLover 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseHow did Harry know it was Malfoy who snuck her the diary? |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Much better then canon. |
| BlackPotter 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat stuff! |
| Eliza Marie Smith 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseIf this is a one shot I'm going to scream. Where is the romance!?!?!!? |
| 908 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAw...she should thank him with a kiss^_^!lmao very cute! |
| Silver Warrior 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet. Very well done. |
| Shadowface 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! its cool how Harry did most of the Talking. |
| Red Death 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseSo Harry is how old in this fic? 30? His dialogue here is FAR too old for him... |
| reimanr06 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abusehey i really like your other stories so i decided to red this one. its pretty good, despite the H/G ( by the way, your OOTP series is about the only H/G i can stomach, besides Imogen's stuff) but really, when you have harry trying to take the guilt away from Ginny in the chamber, and he says if i hadnt seen you just as my best friends baby sister... thats really not something that a 12 year old would say. a 12 year old would say something like why the heck did you talk to the stupid diary, you icky girl?!?of course all twelve year olds see siblings of their friends as exactly that, siblings of their friends (im seeming to have a hard time of writing "friends" properly the first time so i think i'll go to bed soon. keep up the other great work! |
| dan-rad 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseyet another well written fic. From Summer |
| Loriel Eris 2003-11-25 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was lovely. Thank you for sharing. This is ever so much better than How It Really Happened. ;) The H/G shipper in me was just a pile of mush. In my opinon, Harry and Ginny were completely in character *and* you had them interacting like this, something which must have been very difficult to get right, given that its only CoS/Ginny's first year and she is terribly shy around Harry. Really enjoyed this. Loriel |
| Mistri Tonks' Admirer 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! Ruskbyte, this was brilliant! How do you do this? |