Oh. My tears have been jerked and I am most thoroughly surprised by this fact.

so beautiful... and so subtle. I love the line 'A slow, soft sigh, and Xellos had one less person to watch the sunset with.' because you know Zel is dead, but it's frank and matter of fact, not gushing angst. because not everything is about high dramatics. I applaud you.

Wow. It’s beautiful. Thank you.

o.o...This story was really neat to read. I liked how it wasn't a romantic story. Just based on friendship. Very very interesting take on both chatacters.

Wow, i really liked that. Not what i expected. As son as ya had zel say that he didn't hate xel, i was waiting for all that sappy stuff. Good work

Oh my. I can honestly say that this is one of the absolute best pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read. You wrote this ficlet wonderfully, and....just wow. It's a very unique view on their relationship, but I loved it. I love this story so much that not adding it to my favourites seems unthinkable.

*teary* wow, a story that focuses on Zelgadis' and Xellos' relationship as friends instead of enemies or lovers (does anyone besides me find that couple disturbing? *cough*). T_T Very nice

*snif* *snif* *snif*
That was really BEAUTIFUL AND DEPRESSING AT THE SAME TIME.
I just luv it.

*wants to cry*
*doesn't*
Damn, that's good stuff. I don't know too much about Slayers, so I wonder if I've just read a spoiler, but it was worth it if I have. I enjoyed this fic muchly.

~Sam

... ::starts bawling:: wwwaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! So sad.

Well, congrats on making my eyes all teary.
*sniffles*
*tries not to cry*
*breaks down and weeps*

That was ::sniff:: beautiful. Good job.

A very nice story

^_^ Well that is a new perspective of them, and it seems mostly in character. Good job.

aww!!!!!!!!!! More like this please!!!!!!!!!!