|Reviews for A Flower Blooms in the Capital|
| AlphaWolf45 4/3/13 . chapter 1
Update soon… I really wanna know what happens next :)
| nightsentinel09 1/23/13 . chapter 1
This is a nice introductory chapter.
Switching the Miyanaga sisters school is a novel idea.
I'm really looking forward to how Saki will interact with the Shiraitodai members. Sumire should find Saki a bit more easier and at the same time harder to handle than Teru. Poor her.
Anyway, there is no mistake in the mahjong game that I could see. Except further analysis will probably point out the possibility that Saki is playing puppet master in the board again. Which is just scary. But then again, Saki fighting at full throttle (or at least as full throttle as possible since she is still wearing socks) is one the thing that I anticipate the most.
So good job on this.
| Vein's Simply Tired 1/14/13 . chapter 1
This is epic xD !
Thank you for making this... the "shouldn't you be studying?" part hits hard thought D: *I have test tomorrow but didn't want to study* lol
| geekysoundcat 1/7/13 . chapter 1
Cool, take on the story. Don't think I've seen anyone use it before. Hope you update soon!
| fansgirl 12/31/12 . chapter 1
interesting...I always imagine if Saki Shiraitodai student but Teru still in Shiraitodai too then Saki transferred to Kiyosumi, but nothing like you who exchange Saki and Teru school.
but I like your story and it's very rare to read Shiraitodai Saki with long hair
| EXpertUS 12/29/12 . chapter 1
wow... I'm glad I could read more Saki fic... and this one is original... having the Miyanaga sisters exchange their schools... I'm all giddity for the next chapter..
| Fragment of ring 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Good start. Saki is a little out of character but that good too, but it should be 71st interhight not 68th.
And yeah rigging the game is hard, but it's fun.
| BlacksFTW 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Nice story although Saki would be a lot more appealing as herself (you know being shy and all), but that's just my opinion i guess...
Update soon :)
| Ksakep 12/27/12 . chapter 1
I approve this story.
| morli 12/26/12 . chapter 1
Nice start for a prologue! Although there is many unanswered question, I already have an enough idea what this story is about, Saki and her sister switch school right?
It will be nice if you give a reason why Saki go to Shiraitodai instead Kiyosumi. Also what is her relation with the rest of her team like? It's hard to know because you immediately jump to interhigh and skip the entrance to the Shiraitodai.