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Wow look at my little boggart of a guest review, showing up just after I post my other one.

Anyways, onto the chapter!
Not gonna lie, the first part scared me a little bit llD Yandere!Amy? Oh gosh.
Can't wait to see how this goes!
And Elesis G. Lestrade lolololol.

/flails desperately
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Screeeaaammmm.
What is this pro
Cannot this pro
Gurl why you so pro
Seriously update update update
This pro
Let me foam away at this pro
One thing llD
At the end, when it said "I do have one fried, his name is Rufus Wilde."
I think you meant to put friend, right?
LordLunewateryoudoingleaveth isproaloneandgosulkinthenoob dorner.
SieghartXRufus. I'm looking forward to that from this fic. llD
Update soon please!

/redoing my review because the other one didn't show up
Flopflopflop
This is amazing. I love how you combined the two aspects of two different stories together.
But there are two things that slightly concerns me:
At the last line, where it goes "I do have one fried, his name is called Rufus Wilde."
Did you mean friend instead of fried? Since I'm pretty sure Sieghart isn't going to fry Rufus. XD;;;
Also, the "called" seems like a extra word. I think it would fit better if it was just "his name is Rufus Wilde." or "he is called Rufus Wilde".
And the "Sieghart Ecrnard Holmes" seems a bit repetitive, but I've read stories where they repeated it on purpose to add to the whole darkness of the story, so nothing there.
Overall, it was AMAZING and I'm looking forward to more!

Very interesting. I want to read the next chapter soon to give out my thoughts on the matter. Oh, and on that subject, who's Luke? Is he the one on the ds games?