|Reviews for Heart of the City|
| Half Fortress Portal 1/21/13 . chapter 1
Wow, this is GREAT! I loved the descriptions and the detail and things like that you put in and I liked how you knew about the half life universe and how you can just write up such an amazing short story! But what I think you might want to improve on is make it an actual story! He could have survived the bullet in his back! Please, write more, I LOVE what you've written!
| Quinn beirne 1/6/13 . chapter 1
Very god fanfic fun and cool please post more
| iDOG 12/29/12 . chapter 1
Aw, man... This truly made me sad.